| Reviews for Promises of a Wandering Hero |
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   Bagrat chapter 27 . 7/14 I'm so glad to see this was updated recently. There is hope! |
| DracoArtemisLeopin chapter 15 . 7/13 Overachievers huh? *remembers the entirety of FSN and parts of Fate Zero* Yeah, that's one way to put it. |
| XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 7/3 To be honest I'm really iffy on this fic. There are a lot of verb tense errors as well as general mispellings. That's without even mentioning how "off" Shirou feels. It's not to the point of being OOC yet, but he definitely feels wierd. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/17 What? So you're saying that if , say, Anthony Joshua wasn't expecting it, he can be knocked out in one sucker punch by an 18 year old girl? How does someone as stupid as you write such a fanfic lmfao |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/10 No these girls are so annoying that im not even thinking of reading the og with one Japanese beta mc because ik they must walk all over that guy im pretty sure he was using that shitgy bathroom for a good while im hoping shirou destroys her pride as a swordsman idk their backstory but i doubt i would feel sorry for sword bitch and naru bitch unless they were forcibly gangbanged |
| Dragonlord1199 chapter 1 . 6/8 Please dm a link to your old pokemon stories |
| surviversp chapter 27 . 6/5 Thank you for the enjoyable story so far. It kept me wanting to read more the entire way through along with uncontrollable smiling on occasion. I've liked the character interactions overall with the latest arc with Illya having some fun ones. Looking forward to more whenever your schedule allows. |
| Aamer chapter 27 . 6/4 good. |
| Sprengkamp chapter 27 . 6/3 Th for the chapter |
| DRaG0Ns chapter 10 . 6/3 No one even mentions the fact that she pulled a real sword out during a sparring duel, the tried to kill Shirou with that sword. |
| R-king 93 chapter 27 . 5/31 Awesome chapter |
| DeOPOrange chapter 20 . 5/27 "Boarding School in Scotland"... HOGWARTS?! |
| Primordial Inscriptor Z-09 chapter 27 . 5/27 Who knew idiocy ran in the family? Anyways, hurray for more future combat scenes! |
| Wakiyamani chapter 27 . 5/25 Wahhh... enough with the fluff. As soon as I read Shirou's speech in the last chapter, all I could think of was ""I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom I can tell you I don't have money, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you let my daughter go now that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you and I will kill you."" And then I was actually hoping he'd go John Wick on her... But I got 'aftermath'-fluff. I know I know character development is important, but I'm still looking forward to Mundane-CrimeLord vs Moonlit World. |
| bluefish1945 chapter 27 . 5/23 Plot twist Koala are death apostle ancestor.. |
