I love it

Me encanta que de a Reid! En otras no es permanente

Es sangriento, y fantastico!

Nice story that could be great, if the characters were less OOC, and more like in the show. You kinda show us your view of the characters here, and it's slightly bothering. I've looked up a couple of your other stories, and I find the same problem everywhere, like your writing doesn't evolve at all, which is, by the way, another problem. You can't really control the way you write, but yours is... weird, I'd say? I don't mean to sound mean (lol) or anything, but it feels kind of childish, and things are a little too rushed. If I were you, I'd try to improve my writing style because I'm having a hard reading your (honestly good and well-thought) stories without cringing a bit. Good luck and I hope you won't be upset by what I said.

Very good and interesting beginning. I like it.

Clever son of a bitch. Dr river song now im about to cry/laugh and im at a wedding reception

Oh! And it's really bloody late lol! Like my eyes are burning from keeping them open! Oh shite it's 4:23 in the morning and I have to be up by 7:00... OH WELL IT WAS SO OOOOO WORTH IT! I hope I have dreams about this

WEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWW YEAH THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A RIDE! READ THE HOLE BOOK IN ONE DAY, LOVED EVERY NANO SECOND OF IT! YOU ALWAYS PLEASE ME AHVSHSGSHSVSHS AAAAAAAHHHHHH IT'S SO GOOD I WANT TO PUNCH SOMETHING! WELL DONE YIPPEEEE!... though I am kinda sad it's finished... OH WELL YOU HAVE SO MANY OTHER STORY'S WOHOOOOOOOO OOOooOoOoOOOOOo!

Awwwwwwwww I fangirled so fricking hard when reid asked rossi to tell him about his first time at the Bau

There were a couple mistakes, but I think overall this is going to be a good story.

I loved this so much! You write very well, and I'll probably be rereading this in the future! And the Doctor Who references were great

Oh, you hit more, a lot more than 300 reviews. People enjoy your writing. If you wrote a book, we would buy that book.
I can see where Morgan is coming from Gideon waltzes back into Reid's life and all is forgiven.

I am so glad I'm rereading this so I don't have to wait until tomorrow. Yay for me for thinking this arsehole of a doctor was a bod, verdy,verdy bod man (from a Seinfeld episode). Ok, I'm someone who laughs at her own jokes.

Maybe she didn't put enough sugar in it. We all know he drank coffee flavored sugar.

Your AN at the beginning of this chapter reminds me of another story name, "Dummy." In the story Reid isn't the same as he was in the beginning. It's one of the best stories I have ever read. I may gripe from time to time, but I love how you maintain the realness (if that's a word) of the story.

As for Spencer yelling at his father, none of the team realize how terrible and cowardly this man, who supposedly loved his family would desert his sick wife with an 10-11 year old boy. William was a coward. He never deserved to be called father. There, now I got something off my chest.

Poor Garcia. She does need a break.