This was great! I can tell you put a lot of work into this! It reads very well, giving the court cases a very authentic feel.

I like this story so far. I've always wondered, why nobody really tried to take Robin away from Batman. In reality nobody would approve of Batman taking Robin out for crime-fighting! I think it's a difficult topic to write about and still be realistic. I'm very interested in the proceedings of this story!
And I'm sorry for my bad grammar... I'm from Germany and english isn't my native-language.

Been working my way through this since last night. It's really interesting to see these vigilantes having to face the very real threat of being deemed unsuitable guardians for their children due to child endangerment! I liked how thorough you were. It makes sense that the judge would have to actually shadow Batman on patrol to get an adequate sense of what a DC vigilante's life is like.

Poor little Dickie, he was hurt so badly so _often_ throughout this ordeal...!

i loved the story. all the characters were interesting and i was invested in them right away. all their motivations and reasons were believable. dent is a bitch tho. i liked how you wrote batman and robin. robin wasn't just a helpless little boy and batman had a good balance between being tough while still being caring. the way you wrote the victim of abuse felt very real to me, and i felt so bad when the little boy was killed. the judge was a neat guy he seemed a pretty realistic character. the thing about not letting single parents adopt pissed me off. i was super happy when batman and robin were reunited. the whole epilpogue was super satisfying, it made me really happy

This is amazing

Excellent. Very coherent, clear writing. I enjoyed it. You mention being a librarian - I went to library school and got 2/3 through before I quit and got married. I have enjoyed Batman and Robin since I was a child (a long time).

I Hope that Robin is ok.

It's very interesting to see how the legal system would handle a case like this. I've enjoyed your story and the thought-provoking questions it not only proposes, but attempts to answer.

I hope that Robin is doing better

I wish Robin luck. & Batman.

I had a great time reading your story! I liked the plot concept and seeing how Robin kept finding himself in trouble.

IHope that Robin isok.

Harvey Dent was re-tried?

That violates the 5th Amendment in the Bill of Rights!

This is the Sedition Act all over again; the Sedition Act (which was pre-Civil War) out-lawed saying anything bad/against the federal government, which violates the First Amendment's freedom of speech!

(I only remember this because I just took my History Honors Semester Exam last week.)

I hope that Robin is ok.

I hope that Robin is ok.!?