I so can't remember if I ever even save this or reviewed it anyway good work

Until I came across your last two works. This one was my favorite.

*a chorus of bravos fills the air*

Oooohhh

Nice lemons. :3
Loved the solution you chose to remedy Sarah's two lives. Brilliant!

You keep on misusing the word "donned." It does not mean what you think it means. You cannot have a "feather and leather donned Goblin King." You can have "a feather-and-leather-wearing Goblin King." Or you can have "a Goblin King who had donned feathers and leathers." It's the Goblin King, or whoever, who does the donning; the things like feathers and leather that are donned. And "spat". The word connotes anger, hatred, things like that; you keep misusing it to merely mean "said." I love your stories, but your semiliteracy makes me disinclined to go on with them.

How does Sarah know that "the food here has always been really good" when the only thing she ate previously was that peach?

This is one of those fics I consider to be fully canon. I've came back and re-read it several times now, and I never get tired of how in-character and real it seems. You do a wonderful job of capturing their personalities and this is probably the best, most plausible sequel I could think of.

I really enjoyed this story! Very awesome!

This is probably the best well written that I have ever read in fanfiction. And I've read A LOT! The detail you put into this chapter besides the obvious lovemaking was amazing. Great work! Can't wait to finish!

Wonderful smut! I very much like your prose.

Wonder if he changes his mind grins evily

What to say

Forever isn't long at all...

OH. So she can tell she's outside the shower, but fails to notice a glowing orb and feathers falling from the sky?! DAAAAGNABIT.

Ps. Ohhh dat closing line.