| Reviews for Hidden in the Blackness |
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ElderBioshock chapter 26 . 7/24/2018 This is honestlyso greatandi cantwaitfor youtoupdate. |
Miratirx chapter 26 . 5/16/2018 I just watched a episode of Supernatural were they play cards for years, so weird. Anyway another great chapter albeit a few minor grammatical errors. Can't wait to see how this game turns out, I hear truth or dare is always interesting. |
WyldeHeart chapter 26 . 4/22/2018 Well, this is quickly becoming one of my favorite MBAV fics. Slow burn and a werewolf-turned Ethan? Count me in! Now if I can just fix all those grammar and spelling mistakes. The words "there, they're and their" only seem to exist in spirit as far as this story goes. Doesn't take away from the fantastic plot, though, so I'll stop complaining. |
MBAV fan66 chapter 26 . 3/18/2018 Looks like it's not going to be just an "in and out" sort a deal for them now, huh? Lol! They're going to be there for a while. Let the deadly game of Truth and Dare begin! Lol! Somehow I think this game is going to cause even more strain on Ethan and Benny's relationship after it's over with. Judging by the that little argument they had earlier. It's clear that Benny doesn't like Ethan always hovering over him and acting as is supervisor all the time ever since he became a werewolf. He wants Ethan to treat him more as his equal and not as a child all the time when things seem dangerous. Come on, Benny! Lighten up, some! Ethan's only like that because it's part of his wolfy nature to protect and look out for the ones he loves! Lol! He can't help it! Lol! :P Creepy cloak guy makes his move against our boys, now. I bet he's also the smoke man from the woods that tried to make off with Ethan and then set the entire forest ablaze, too! Sadly, we still have no clue to who he is or why he seems so interested in Ethan and Benny. It's like he's their personal stalker or something, since he knows everything there is to know about them already. As if that's not creepy in the least bit. *shiver* Lol! :P Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D |
TeamEthanMorgan chapter 25 . 3/17/2018 Yay! Another chapter. Would have read it earlier, but one, I was in the car reading, and dad suddenly decided I should drive. Then I wanted to read it again yesterday but it was way too hectic. Finally got the time today. Ah, I miss my babies, and I miss you, too! So good to read this again. Keep up the amazing work, as usual. |
Miratirx chapter 25 . 3/15/2018 o()o Glad you updated. I'm sorry to hear that. I'm sure everything with go just fine and you'll be up and at em again soon hang in there乃 |
MBAV fan66 chapter 25 . 3/15/2018 Now Ethan can rest a little bit easier knowing for a fact that his fam is ok. Though I imagine he might still be a bit concerned about whoever that doppelganger of himself that's currently with his family having a good time, is. That and maybe a bit miffed about them going to California on vacation without him, too. Lol! One things for sure...never let Benny carry you while you're knocked out, or else bad things seem to happen to you. Like conking your head on part of the bed and letting a heavy book fall flat on your face. Lol! Talk a rude awakening. Lol! Good thing he's werewolf and heals quickly or else he'd probably be left with that black-eye for quite some time, along with a bit of a headache, too. Lol! :P But I guess Ethan was able to get his payback of sorts from it when he kept stomping on Benny's foot when they were busy taking to Katee in the hotel room. Lol! Tasha sure has no shame when it comes to walking around in her undergarments when there's clearly male visitors there. Huh? Lol! I bet Ethan and Benny were both really embarrassed beyond belief seeing a half naked woman in her underwear and bra walking around like that, without a care in the world. Lol! So, now the school's been broken into on the same day that Ethan's house was torched?! Man! It's like they can't catch a break with weird things always happening. Huh? Of course, now it looks like the school is about to be broken into for a second, but this time by Ethan and Benny. I bet they never expected WANTING to ever break in school, before. Lol! Most of the time it was probably more like OUT of school, instead! Lol! :P Maybe that guy in the robe in the woods spying on Ethan, was one of the allies that Sylvan spoke of in chapter 22, when he secretly met with Ethan (dressed up as their pizza delivery guy) and then wiped his mind of their meeting afterwards before leaving? Maybe that's who he sent to keep an eye on Ethan while he's busy pretending to be (fake) Ethan while with his family in California, if that's who the imposter really is? Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! :D |
Guest chapter 24 . 8/25/2017 THIS IS GREAT OMG I'M SO READY FOR BETHAN |
TeamEthanMorgan chapter 24 . 8/22/2017 Hello! Hello! Nice to see another chapter. Would have read it earlier, but I have been busy. *flashback to me binge watching K drama* *clears throat* Anyway... Oh, my God. I would really love a season 3, but I'm always like 'I don't know man they're all busy'. Also, I SOOOOO agree about the thing with Atty not pulling off a stache. A stache a beard? Why not. But a stache alone doesn't suit his face. But whatever. He's still active on social media and that's all I care about ... unlike some people *looks at Matthew all the way from home*. Dude, don't stress about the length or the content of your chapters. I just love reading your fics. Your writing style is just perfect for me, and I always enjoy your writing. Some angst and some slight Bethan in there. That's my cup of tea. BUT IT'S OKAY, ETHAN! BENNY IS HERE FOR YOU! AAAAH! ... I'm okay. I swer. I'm ver okey. Anyway, can't wait for your next work/October cause like I love everything MBAV you do! Keep up your good work and don't stress out! Buh-byeeeeee! |
MBAV fan66 chapter 24 . 8/21/2017 My hope for another season of the show has never left me! But I do have to admit, it is severely starting to wane on me a bit. So, let's just hope they can hopefully make it a reality and convince those ridiculous tv broadcastors to give it another shot! As well, as the show's creators Fresh Tv, as well since it has been a few years since the ending of the season 2. Yeah...I kind a have to agree with you on the Atticus with a moustache thing there. Lol! It makes him look more different and sort a creepy looking, in my opinion. Lol! :P It may be a filler chapter, but at least there was some Bethan action in it. :D Lol! At least, some comforting action that is. ;P So, now we know more about Ethan's family history a little bit. That apparently magic runs in both sides of the family and that his seer abilities probably came from his great great (and however more greats after that. Lol) grandfather on his dad's side of family. Why do I get the feeling that Ethan will still try to seek out whoever he was thinking about seeing (I'm pretty sure it's Sylvan, but I could be wrong) earlier. If he does go and sees this person then, it can only lead to more possible trouble for him, then. |
Guest chapter 23 . 7/17/2017 I love this story! And I actually like the last half, but you can change it if you want to, since this is your story |
MBAV fan66 chapter 23 . 7/17/2017 You were possessed by the Bethan feels to do it's bidding! *waves hands around ominously and speaks in spooky voice* That's why you couldn't help but to write it and never stop until you were finished! Ooooo! :P Seems like both Sarah and Ethan are having some mixed feelings here, huh? No telling how she'd react once she (and Ethan himself, apparently) finally learns that the one who Ethan truly loves and wants to be with is Benny. Let's just hope that she's the good person that she seems to be and will hopefully take the news pretty well and civil like. *crosses fingers for future reference about the subject* :P Just like old times, huh? Ethan and Benny getting into a bit of supernatural mischief and hi-jinxs, huh? Lol! ;D Solving the unexplainable with some good old fashioned mystery solving antics that tend to lead them into more trouble than it's worth! Lol! Except this time with Ethan and his new werewolf abilities to help them out a bit. If it wasn't for his werewolf powers then they'd probably be even more worse off than they were. I wonder why Ethan still hasn't told Sarah (and Erica) about his werewolf-ism, yet? Or Benny and his Grandma and Cody that Rory kind a already figured it out before they did and knows, already? I wonder what's got the Vampire Council so on edge lately and why they feel the need to keep an eye on Ethan, now? I mean, I get that he's a werewolf now and all, but still...there has to be more to it than just that...? *strokes chin, while in deep thought* I just so LOVED the Bethan feels in this chapter! Lol! Benny you need to just come on out with it and tell Ethan the truth! You love him! And in the "best friend" kind a way, either! As in, "I wanna cuddle with you until were practically one big tangled mess of bodies and I wanna kiss the living hell out of you until we both can't breathe" kind a love! XD Lol! I'm surprised Ethan doesn't find it totally strange or odd that he can't remember if he really did have a vision telling to seek out that library and box or not, considering he always remembers what he sees in them. You'd think he'd find it a bit suspicious. Even though, we all know the REAL reason as to what lead him there in the first place. *wink wink* ;D Guess, Sylvan's mind wipe trick is still in effect on him. *shrugs* I wonder what Ethan will do with the chest and what's contained inside it, that seems to give Benny the chills and all, but not Ethan? And OH MY FREAKIN' GOD! WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO ETHAN'S HOUSE?! Why would just randomly...blow up like that?! Thank goodness nobody was home when it happened. Well...we all know that, but Ethan and the others don't. I'm starting to think that maybe now Evelyn didn't have anything to do with the Morgan's sudden and random two week vacation trip to who knows where. And that she's the one responsible for the other Ethan who's traveling with them, as well...*starts pondering some more about it* I'm starting to suspect that maybe Sylvan might've had more to do with it than I thought...Or perhaps, whoever that smoke man was in the woods that time that attacked Ethan and Benny, might've behind it somehow...but I highly doubt it. In any case, I really enjoyed reading the silly antics of Ethan and Benny trying to solve a supernatural mystery on their own! With Ethan trying to be all serious about it, while Benny's all acting goofy and funny about it with his "not-so-always" bright ideas coming back to bite him in the butt and sometimes leading them into more problems than necessary. But poor Ethan, he can't but to go along with his friend's ridiculous ideas and antic, now can he? And NOT help but to crack a small laugh or amused smile his way about it, too! Lol! ;P I can't wait to see what happens next after that major ass of a cliff hanger you left us with! I'm so excited! XD |
TeamEthanMorgan chapter 23 . 7/17/2017 Ayeee! Dude, we're the same age! That's cool to know! Hehe, so as always, I loved this chapter. Your writing style is so awesome. Though for a moment I did forget what had happened before with Ethan and shit. Though that hint of Bethan always kills me. Hurt Benny, hurt Ethan, them just spending time together. IT'S SO PUUUUURE! Keep this up! I'm always here! ((BTW did you see the live IG Vanessa did with 3 of the gang?)) |
TeamEthanMorgan chapter 22 . 6/5/2017 Hmmm, what could go wrong on this trip? I wonder. I tbh don't blame Ethan for any of this. It's out of his control to comply and stuff. Though if I do think both are stupid. Judging by what happened the other day, it would be unwise for one of them to go outside to the porch alone. But whatever, they're stupid canonically, even though Ethan is allegedly the 'smart one'. Bruh. Anyway, Ethan, keep lying to yourself. "Girl of my dreams" my ass. Even Sylvan caught on your gayness. Anyone can. XP It's hot where I live here. It get to 109 degrees F (I had to convert that cause I use Celsius) in here on occasions, and IT'S SO HUMID, especially during nighttime when we have to drive to places. I would comment about the lawn, but I don't really pay attention to it. From what mom tells me though, the grass burns from the heat. The palm trees get tired, and everything dies except for our mulberry tree for some reason. XD So I relate when it comes to heat. We can cry together. As always, great chapter. I love and hate where this is going. This story is right up my alley. Cute and fluffy but is not shy from action. Good job! :) |
MBAV fan66 chapter 22 . 6/4/2017 Another visit from Sylvan. Ethan done been jedi mind tricked by his sire! Lol! Poor Ethan. He's like putty in Sylvan's hands whenever he touches him. It's like all his free will just goes right out the window whenever Sylvan uses the sire/werewolf bond that they share together. I wonder what he wants Ethan to find? And what exactly he has planned for Benny's magic, it seems? So, that was Sylvan who sent that weird mirrored glass shard flying right through the smoke-man in the woods a day or two ago. The weather here where I live has mostly been a bit warm as well. Like in the 80 degree range. Also, we've been getting quiet a bit of rain in the area, as well. Some more than others. The lakes near the town that I live at are all really high in levels. Anyways, can't wait for the next one! And yay, to more cute and adorable Ethan/Benny interactions! Even if they still won't admit to themselves that they have a thing for each other that goes beyond just friendship. Lol! ;P |