I have been following this story for a very long time. Back when it only had 12 chapters. I would really like to see this story get finished. Or at the very least, just provide an update as to what the status is of this fanfic. I hope everything is going well and I hope to hear an update soon.

I absolutely

I guess this fanfic is abandoned now? That's a shame.

I like Aldra. She’s different from the other girls and brings a fresh perspective which is definitely a good thing.

I don’t like anything about the Nowa story, but I don’t think that’s your fault I’m just not a fan of the character. I’d rather her be boring and barely in the show than interesting and have a big part. I also don’t like her as part of the harem.

Can’t wait for me. See ya around.

Thanks!jn

It's really crazy to think I've been following this story for six years and am still excited to see a new chapter added. I hope life treats you well and I don't know if you have anymore plans for it but I think it would make sense for Church to work in practice with a crossbow into his routine. Since he knows that Daedalus is most likely going to need him to fight some sort of battle later on.

I just found this story a few days ago and i'm already addicted. I like the Church character and his interactions with the girls. I also like how you expanded on their character and making them less one dimensional. I'm not entirely sure how you're going to handle the romance but harem or a simple pair, i'm fine with either though I prefer harem. I like the girls Church seems to closest to like Airi and Alleyne, They happen to be just two of my favorites. If I can make just one suggestion please add Aldra to Church's possible harem. She's like the perfect wife and after all her "husband" is pretty much the reader/viewer.

An update?

Loving the story! I’d be happy to give you any criticism, but I’m really not one for them. The one thing I seem to question is how quickly it seemed that Elian got over her hatred for Church. I know that isn’t the premise you’re going for, but it just seems a little out of character for her. Regardless, fantastic story and I hope you continue!

Hey what ever happened to my oc Lucas? I haven't heard of him anymore.

Awesome chapter as always. Really liked that shizukas way to sudden interest in church hasn't just been accepted. Also liked the way aldra was portrayed can't wait for the next chapter. Also I'm totally down with young echidna and alleyne adventures

I just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story. I found this story back in high school and have been checking back on it regularly. I really want to see relationships grow between Church and the girls. Please keep up the good work.

Not to be splitting hairs, but with my research of the tournament one of the only rules is that both combatants can't be killed in a match. Although if someone was grievously injured yet alive to call the match only to die after due to the injuries inflicted, well I would call that an exploitable technicality. This has been my headcannon of Maria's death, mostly cause no source isnt that specific on the matter. Also I would think Maria would have put up a better fight since had the respect of Claudette and even Echidna, but hey no point get to g around the fact that she lost anyway right. Otherwise Intriguing chapter.

Uhhh this is the second time you've updated and it's stayed the same chapter for me I don't know about anyone else though

Pretty good~