I do not like this Hermione. I mean she's always a little emotionally daft, and generally rude to Fleur in the beginning. But your Hermione continues to behave like an oblivious bitch. I mean, yay, she's not rude when Fleur is trying to console her after her fight with Ron, but everything until then? I don't understand why Fleur would even WANT to be with her.

Finish please.

Would've expected Hermione to be a bit more reasonabkev

Another good story went unfinished. Sadness.

Holy crud that was such a beautifully written chapter. I'm somewhat to continue since I know this hasn't been completed or updated in ages but that chapter just blew me away. No matter if this story is incomplete I still have this chapter that was so wonderfully written.

Yo this is actually really good. I decided to try it out since the description looked funny, but I think this will be amazing

I won't lie, I came across this story and was just blown away. This is the second time I've come across a second person narrative that I fell in love with. I could barely sleep because I wanted to read more. I'm sad that you weren't able to continue it but it is certainly a story I'll reread even if I never get an ending

update soon please

This fanfic is amazing, is so good i dont have words to say how much i enjoy your writing.

This has been so good and such an adventure! It's been a long while since you've updated and idk if you get notifications for this anymore, but if you every fancy revisiting this work please do xoxo

I write in the hope that you somehow you still receive and read these reviews. I cannot say in enough words how much this piece of work has given me so much joy.

I hope you do come back and revisit it one day and finish it. You have incredible ways in writing. I have not come across such beautiful writing for a fanfiction, I was hooked and intrigued every chapter. I felt each chapter was well thought-out, the story line, the characters, I adore all of them. I really want more of this. Yvonne and Caro have fast become my second favourite characters in this story. Their storyline is as cute as that of Fleur and Hermione.
I've never left such a lengthy review before, but I just want my words, as a reader, to reach you in a appreciation of your work. If you've moved on to other creative work, please do share. There's something in the way you write that makes me want more.

I hope time will be a friend, and let you come back work on this.

A very very hopeful reader.

Hello I was just wondering if you will continue working in this fanfic, it's just amazing I can express myself how much i enjoy reading. I can said that I was just to envelope in the history that at the end of this chapter I just can think that asking you begging you to please continued. I been reading a lot of fanfics about this couple and let me tell you that you work it's just amazing. Sorry if I can write so well I'm from Mexico and I keep learning English. Well I hope you can reed this message

Please update! Dun drop the story! We love you! ️

Fleur's reaction when she finds out Hermione's at the bottom of the lake is going to be bad. Her instincts are going to go haywire.

Really enjoying this story and there's so much more to find out about the two of the ! You can't leave it there :p update soon please :D