Amazing story! Thank you!

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I personally think that after all the training, I believe Sakura would be the best to change Neji's point of point view regarding fate.

She literally dreams her future and is set up to safe "Tobi" at all cost.

Besides, since Hinata and Neji did not fight as in canon, Naruto does not have a bone to pick with Neji.

The other thing is: Neji has the Byakugan and is a genius, yes, but can he land a hit on her if she teleports?

And well... I kind of have the feeling that by the end of the month she will be on the mind of: "so you know the inevitability of life, that's good, so why are retraining your potential when you could just find a loophole and use it to make your own fate?"

Naruto is cute and everything, but his talk no jutsu still does nor affect me like it should... Gara's case I can understand it a little. He had time to think about it and make his own decisions. But Nagato? Really? He spent whole his live going one way and then after talking with naruto a few minutes he decided to go the other way. Whf? I get that people can and do have change of heart but wasn't that just too fast?

Kakashi. I think kishimoto was too nice to you with the team. Had this actually happened in cannon. I don't know... Wouldn't your ideal of temawork had literally broke by you unknowingly? Really I just don't know if it was a good idea to put you as sensei as much as I love you as a character.

So she is seen the future and not been manipulated through sharingan dreams. Interesting. The last part though. Madara must have been unnerved by her actions though. X)

Or they could just begin to pant discord in her head. This is just the 3rd chapter and damn this is good.

This is a situation that I wonder why never happened in the series instead of kishimoto trying to draw her cuter. Even if it was for the sake of spying on Konoha. She would have been dismissed pretty easily because, when put together with naruto and sasuke, she did not much at all when she was younger and was not paid attention for her efforts either. So her inferiority complex would have been used perfectly. She was rabid for sasuke, I know, but wouldn't that be another reason to use? "Hey what is it that sasuke cares more about? Power? I can help you with that! Keep the secret though, you want to surprise him right?"

The idea of Sakura defecting and being on Madara’s side is so interesting! And your execution of it is great! I also like how you give everyone a perspective and give all the characters a dimension so it’s like not all black and white

The Story is great. You are a good weiter.

Continua

Pls update

Please update!

This is really good. I love the different take on Sakura and her position within team seven. She feels like a flushed out character. I also enjoy seeing how Madara’s interactions with her start out very canon and manipulative but over time his true feelings are starting to be revealed. It makes him feel more human while not suddenly flipping home to the “good” side. He feels like what Madara should, manipulative, bipolar, and terrifying with an added streak of possessiveness and caring.

I really really love this! I can’t wait for the next chapter, but make sure to take your time and get the rest you need! I hope you get the credit you deserve for this, it’s amazing!

Heyho, ich weiß zwar nicht wann Du zuletzt geubdatet hast, würde es aber sehr mögen wenn Du weiter schreiben würdest.
LG