hey how about sakura? is iruka died?

This is really great ending hope canon like this will be the best. But poor Iruka, how could no reaction from Naruto? Shisui x OC is great, they cute. At last he not with Itachi coz Itachi with Izumi(canon), too bad you not write about her.

Mikoto is the best Mother! sniff..
but I dancing when Hiruzen died, Danzo already evil but to be know kond person become evil is hurt the most. do nt care about his reasons but kill is never the answer(especially kill kids in canon).
should sasuke go to Tsunade in first place, sigh..

ahhhhh Fugakuuu!

Fugaku Fugaku Fugaku, it Danzo fault! and Hiruzen!

Ahhhh i dont want Fugaku die, damn it! I hate Hiruzen too!

this chapter break my heart. i thought itachi know sasuke want him died, the one who poisoned him and let him did it that why itachi not go to hospital

Why Fugaku please dont be bad guy, in canon he is not bad coz he is proud of what itachi doing and to... take care sasuke. sniff..

I felt your portryal of Sasuke and Itachi were realistic and very sensitive to their characters. I like the creativity of your story plot since it considers possibilities and plays out the decisions of the characters in a realistic timeframe. Great job I really love it!

"not this time, Nissan" Owo its funny cause Nissan is a car name XDD

Huh...well I had hopes for this work. A time travel story that's actually finished? Unheard of.

But no, it was literally exactly the same as every other time travel story. Sasuke was 16? Yeah right, he had the brains of a 4 year old in this. Once again, the entire plot could have been avoided if Sasuke had just opened his fucking mouth. But no, in the grand, every time travel story must have a fucking idiot who doesn't tell the people who can actually help what they know.

Great fiction. Realistic. Felt bad for itachi tho. You made Sasuke seem too dumb and impulsive. but good characterization. Sasuke could've talked to to after he found out and solved it from there.

The masked man's kinda forboding, but I've faith in our resident time-traveler to resist the temptation! . . Gah, who am I kidding. A Rock's got more common sense than Sasuke. The kid is way too pushy and straight-forward to think things through. And take caution, for once. .

Oh, I do thank you for writing. You're right. This fic will be a relaxing go-to for those inevitable stupid-Sasuke moments ~•~ Ja ne!

Aish, I'm excited too! Itachi getting healed will fix all this angst, nee?

Oh, and I'll agree on your Shisui assessment about him being the only one with any good sense. He did come up with that Genjutsu plan- which would've worked -_- And Itachi did seem too agreeable with Danzo to be perfectly reasonable. The rest, well, wpeak for themselves.

*-* Underestimated Carnage degrees, I have. And. Ouch. Breaking Itachi is an exercise in heartbreak that delivers angst enough to satisfy the most emo of souls. Oh, loved the Kakashi presence. He's fairly chill after all that violence, guess it's his personality at his age now