May I ask if this fit is still being updated? I've followed it since the beginning and even though I completely understand if you're not writing it anymore, I would absolutely love to read more!

Not sure if this is still up for consideration but I think you might’ve gone too far in the other extreme. This fic seems almost disjointed unless you’ve read the books recently enough where you’d still have enough memory of individual conversations and interactions. Just a bit more context would help readers who do know the books and have read them, just not recently.

I remember when I read eclipse I found it so ironic that shadowclan stopped windclan from driving out thunderclan when previously thunderclan brought windclan home after shadowclan drove them out.

b

B or cinderfire’s idea

Forget squirrelflight. what about Hollykit(leaf), lionkit(blaze), and Jaykit(feather(who is blind)) going to hunt foxes. Great starclan this family is filled with mousebrains

Ill be honest I prefer B but im fine with C as well

ooooh I love Cinder's idea!

Interesting concept! I thought it was only going to be crack

I like option c, Cinderfire16's idea.

I'm more in favor of option A. P.S please continue the story of Into the Past.

I like the third option, but you might need to put more description than that in order to not confuse the readers.

I like what you've done so far! :) so you decide! im no good anyways :( gd job!

I vote this new option! (The “edit” one.) This sounds both entertaining and easy to read and write! (As someone who has written (though not posted) some watching/reading the show/movie/book stuff, I totally understand...)

I really love this~ and hope you update again soon!

Cinderfire's option seems best.

That or you could just say f-it and post it anyway on a different account. Or still on this one. Its not like they could do anything to you anyway. Ao3 is also an option, they are less pissy about theses things.

Be awhile since I saw this fic. Not a bad one though.