This was absolutely lovely. Well done.

That was great! Funny, sweet, and fucking hot! Your a great writer!

Geez, that is still some of the hottest sex on this website, thanks! This story is so adorable, it makes me smile every time. I love the bit at the end when Arthur comes out to Valiant, but the whole story is a masterpiece, thanks a lot!

I think you are a good writer and I enjoyed the story. I would've prefered more focus on how their relationship progressed though. For example in the beginning you described briefly that they "talked" about their feelings for each other but I would've wanted to read about the dialogue ;) So for me you could've focused more on emotions and events and maybe less on their sex life in the later chapters. In the beginning it felt like that was important for how their relationship developed but later I think it would be more interesting to read about other things in their relationship and what happened. I liked the part where Gawain found out and when they came out to their friends in the end for example, so more things like that :)
But I did enjoy the story and I'm sure that many like it excactly how it is now, just thought I should let you know my thoughts when reading the story :)

dawww. i really and truly enjoyed this. i love how you developed something that was about sex into a legitimate relationship

woo! no more secrescy nd decetion

i cannot even explain how happy i am about this. so many storied depict uther as a bloodthirsty monster and it is so nice to see that he is semi supportive.

finally!

maybe he met his future inlaw... yes?

one parent down, one to go...

theres so much more that they need to do. when are they gonna go public? when will they tell their parents? when will merlin be the one that gets it

ooh its coming... pun intended

awww :) i like the little bit of fluff outside of all the sex stuff

oh wow! nothing allows one to acknowledge their sexual preference like being unable to get yourself off

that is one way to get off. eager to see if this will become arthurs dirty little secret or if he and merlin will actually become romantically involved.