So chapter 15 of my APUSH textbook was actually about the causes of the Civil War, and I just checked, the fifteenth word on the fourth page really is 'the'... guys I think I took Sora's class. If I remember right the Missouri Compromise was Missouri became the slave state and Maine... the free state? Shit I don't remember. I remember there was one that was Cali and another state, and then one with Missouri for sure. Hey it's better than Sora.

Jesus. I'm a senior now.

(Sorry about my 1:30 my time rant about US History... I just took my final for that class and all there is in my head is History.)

This was a really good story, though there could have been more description along with the dialogue. I think that was my only gripe with it. It was entertaining and made me laugh, but it was also thought-provoking and serious when it needed to be. Sora's the last person I would have expected to have depression issues, but that also made for a really good twist in the plot. Congrats on getting something this huge finished! (: And in less than a year too! That takes lots of dedication. I spent the better part of several days reading this, so thank you. (: OFF TO THE SEQUEL! AND SNIPPETS!

OMG ZEXION AND MY MOTHER SHARE THE SAME BIRTHDAY IN THIS FIC! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

So far, the story's not bad, you're not a bad writer, but the dialogue is getting tiring. It's mostly back and forth, "yes, no, are not, are too," stuff, and it's adding nothing to the story but word count. Demyx's behaviour for an eighteen year old male is also way off base, regardless of how easily excitable and hyper he may be- it's kind of annoying, honestly.
I know the story's completed, but just for future reference.

(If it seems like I'm only pointing out the negatives, well, I kind of am. Like I said, the story is not bad at all, aside from those two things, and you're not a bad writer, I just want to bring those things to your attention. Apologies if I come off as an ass.)

My favorite characture is Axel and sometimes Rox, but that's just a general rule... Loved the chapter, as usual!

Bout damn time, motherfucker :D lemon! Hellyeah! But seriously poor Xion :( that made me sad.

D'awwww! Roxas's letter was perfect and adorible :3 and Gah I was so freaking out for Zexion. D: his dad seems nice though. Great job, as usual cx

So I feaking love this story and I've always been too excited to read the next chapter that I haven't taken the time to leave a review before D: I know, it's damn shamefull. And you guys deserve so many reveiws! So from now on I promise to at least leave a little '3' to show my love or a comment or something every chapter to make up for it... again, this story has like taken over my life I love it so much, you guys are amazing!

Awwwwww! Poor Sora! D: no one deserves that kinda treatment. :/ hopefully Roxas kicks someone's butt.

AWESOME. Tehe lol (: I can't wait to read it ALL, may take me a few hours but I'm up to the challenge!

Omg my birthday is march 3rd! Lol

YESS!
Lixal

i can't believe it's over, this has been a great story, and i loved reading it. sequel?
Lixal

Now I wished my friends and I had planned our trip better... We went to one place for three days and haven't been able to see each other since... Maybe I'll text them about their next break and try to organize another road trip :)

Relatively tame so far :P