This seemed a bit crackish, and I was more than a bit skeptical, but it was actually pretty good. I have no idea what Colbert is like in person, but his depiction here is consistent with the book and the miniseries, and you really brought Cadman, a fairly minor character, to life.

this is pretty good :)

heyy, this was so good, I absolutely LOVED IT! you write them so well.

I can't wait for an update, with this and your PAS series, I think they're really good.

Anyway, I think this was aweome. UPDATE!

Breanna xx

This is so good. I really loved it, you should totally write more, and you write laura and evan so well, in my opinion there isn't enough stories about them, and you nail them. I read all your other atlantis stories and they are so good you should totally update on all of them. :)

Nice story,it's good to see laura from a different perspective.

i can't say i'm a fan of all the swearing though :(

p.s: i'm wishful lt. lorne with a new name :)