That was amazing! You should do a follow on PLEASE! :)

Awesome storyyyy! Love it! Am a huge fan of Loristeve

OMG. UPDATE. This is amazing.

I love Mcweston fics! They are sooo great and u write them very well. Please continue with these stories, they make my day happy!

love mcweston srories :) really good! cant wait to read more

This was enjoyable. We don't get much from Lori which makes her boring, but your view on her actually makes her a person.

I really like this ... Can u please post some more chapters

Aww cute. I love their flirty banter and stuff. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP

I realy do like lori

I did enjoy it! Is that SEAL team #9 hottie Jake? Nice to see him. I'm going to give your prompts a look see if I can get to a good stopping point on my story. I'm a little obsessed with it right now.

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Love love love it! I want more! I like your writing, ;) can I suggest a prompt? ;)

Mcweston fix! Great story you could probably make that story not a one shot if you wanted! I'm excited for the next fic already!

It's good to see that someones writing McWeston. There's 2 ongoing series, one of which is mine which is finishing soon. This is good, and I'd definitely like to see more of this.

Great start. Can't wait for more! Thanks for writing steve/lori stories.

I really like Steve and Lori aka McWeston. I also really like the way you wrote them. I'm happy to see more fanfiction about them since, like, you said there isn't a lot of it. I can't wait to see the other prompts you do; especially the more adult ones, LOL. Update soon.