Fun story. Hope you come back to it.

Oh I love this! I hope you continue to slowly update it when the inspiration hits.

The concept of this story is good, but unfortunately I ended my journey at Chapter 4.

It baffles me as to why she explains her stunts and escapes so easily, and OFFERS to TELL everyone of her plans and executions. Here’s to name a few, without necessarily spoiling it: box cutter, referee, hidden cameras she’s just able to deduce. She just HAS to get acknowledgement, which is upsetting bc you don’t have to SPILL ALL YOUR SECRETS to EVERYONE!

L’s deductive skills are PATHETIC. As are Kira’s, and the entire police force. I don’t understand why L has to ask all these questions- as if the WORLDS GREATEST detective NEEDS EXPLANATIONS?

She’s just not my cup of tea- the ideas and concept is brilliant, but I don’t like characters who are needlessly... I don’t like characters who not only don’t have any tact, but don’t know how to hide their cards. I like a little drama, but there has to be a build up. It also doesn’t always have to be her who reveals it in worlds. Maybe if she had glanced at the camera in her fathers house and smirked- a quick one, and when L and the others watched they didn’t really catch it the first time and there was some speculation as to if she looked or or didn’t, And they slowed down and it was clear that they were aware, and she never mentions it-then her knowing the camera was there has so much more significance. She wouldn’t have to lecture or explain to L like he’s some sort of child. Maybe somebody can bring up the incident later and she doesn’t have to admit it- her smile/smirk is enough. They know, but now she’s something more than a blabbermouth.

Anyways, go end id like to thank the author- 74k words is nothing modest, it’s magnificent. I’m sure your writing has gotten better as you get later on into the story, and you’ve been able to develop the MC as a character.

*also, I use caps for the benefit of readers- there’s no bold and this will allow readers to be able to see certain worlds and be intrigued enough to read my extremely long review. I have no personal grievances with anyone whatsoever, it’s just my honest opinion on a book.

Yay! You updated the story love the new chapter wondering if she get to reveal herself to them.

Love this story can't wait to read more XD

This fic is so good! I really like how you showed the progression of the relationship between L and Kitsu :) I'm also excited to see how this will end.

You did a really good job with the dialogue!

Singular their is easier to read than constant his/her. Anyways great start!

I love this story, but something is a bit off. Considering that the main character in this has been involved in the life of crime that should be a huge reason for her not to be Kira. I'm surprised that it hasn't mentioned that, then again I haven't read the rest of the chapters yet, I was just assuming that it would be someone more mad at criminals and injustice like Light.

XD OMG im DEAD

Is he a boy?

Coutinue please

This chapter is very good!

Actuaiiy being a witness to that death should lower her chances since the entire thing should be on prison cameras.

YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!