Sorry for not reviewing for so long! D: I'm getting too lazy... Epicness fighter Zia! I didn't see THAT one coming, man I suck at fighting...I don't mean to criticize, but I do believe that your story could really benefit from a few lessons with me or Flu in grammar. :P Cyas next chapter! :)

I'm Sorry, about them errors, its not like me, but I have my flaws.

Anyways, most of the errors where in my OC's file, so heres is a updated version. With a few new things that will Boost his chances.

Gender: Male (this was obvious, considering all the 'he's)

Backstory V2: Born in the same towm/village as Josh & Jess, He remained in the shadows for almost 12 years. Come the day of the invasion, his Father had thought him custom crafting. He would destroy any creeper that dared to move when in his sights. Among some of the very few things Alex remembered was watching Jess slice the Creeper that was about blow up Josh. He wanted to go to them for help, but for some reason, Jess didnt like the look of Alex from her first day of school. After clearing the ruins of the town/village, he set to work building his house and a creeper proof shelter, getting Ender Pearls and mining for Diamond. He found over 4 stacks of the precious stone. After a month of writing a book about the invasion, (sounds pretty nerdy, but im sure that you dont mind) he ran into the gang.

Signature Attack: He throws an Ender Pearl at the enemys head, and either breaks the enemy's neck on impact or slices them with his scythe.

Appereance V2: He has a very well built boy with Lapis blue eyes and scruffy brown hair.

I hope you like him! please please consider adding him, cuz it would mean the world to me! Thanks MtM

Darksider, and his Turtle

I am back and filled with idea's!
And this time I have questions AND an OC.

Okay first, The OC.

Name: Alex

Age: 17

Outfit: A dirty cyan blue short sleeved shirt, black leather gloves, a light brown pair of jeans and black muddy boots.

Backstory: Born in the same town/village as Josh & Jess, he stayed in the shadows, until the invasion.
He ran for his life demolishing any creeper he saw. One of the only things Alex remembered was seeing Jess save Josh. He wanted to go after them for help, but he wasnt "friends" with Jess. For some reason that remained unknown to Alex, Jess didnt like the look of him from the first day of he cleared the wreck of the town/village, He the built his home, mined a heap of Diamond and ran into the gang.

Weapon(s): A diamond scythe, which has Sharpness IV and Knockback III,

Love Interest: Zia (only time im gonna have ANYTHING mushy in my reviews)

Appereance: Tan skin, Lapis blue eyes and scruffy hair.

Personality: He is kind and protective

That is it for Alex, pleasee consider adding him to this story! please. . .

Qeustion:

To Zia
Diid you ever consider to take up brewing or fishing? They are VERY nice activities.

Thats it for me! update soon!

Yours faithfuly
Darksider, and his turtle, Terance.

Only us authors have the magical powers to make our epic characters come back to life after being killed with their own swords. ._. IDEA! I'm going to write now.

May I make a suggestion?
(this will only work if you know 1.4)

Sense Creepius got OWNED,
Herobrines NEW right-hand man is a Wither
[name is your choice]

YES MORE GORY DEATH!

p.s You Got Every Detail Of My Twisted Mind Correct.

Keep Up The Death!

I laughed When Josh Died
IT WAS HILARIOUS
Give Us More Death

To The Diamond Sword Creepius Stabbed Josh In The Chest With: How D
oes It Feel To Be Used To Kill Your Owner/To Be Used For Evil?

Y U NO TELL ME!
U MAD BRO?

Grey

*Sad anime face* NOOOOOO! WHY DO THE GOOD GUYS ALWAYS DIE? WHHHHHYYYYYYYY? Wait, I usually like stories where the hero dies. *asdf potato pulls out gun* Not today.

The one thing I have to say is: I love the story arc! I also like they way youve developed Josh's and Jess' personalities! My favorate thing about this chapter was the cameo of the Yogscast and Sly! Oh my gawd I love them! Great story keep it going!

Who the fuck takes a freakin guys gf!Like wtf!And Zombieh,Who in the fuck is Josh?A stuipid damn Slime?Btw DustMan,Epic name.

Creepius,i have a you have a helmet,if so,please explain.

good, better than i could probably do, but i think it would make it a lot better if you did switching 1st person views, like josh writes one chapter, then jess writes the next, etc. anyways, very good!

to:creepius why are creepers always so sad and evil they could be friends with humans you should turn on herobrine 0-o

I love this fic, its my first minecraft fanfic I've ever read, and its really good! Can't wait for chapter 8 :D and thanks, that's what I came up with when people kept on calling me Dust since I work out on the dirt fields, came home with dust all over me, except for around my eyes since I wear sunglasses or goggles depending what we do that day :P I never knew that you could enchant everything, gotta try that out!