Lots unspoken, but the essentials are all here, beautifully so! The repetition in language, structure, imagery is great.

Oh my god, I loved this so much!
First of all, the idea of this AU is everything I never knew I wanted. I loved the pacing in the development of their relationship. And the ending is just... *happy sigh* 3

It takes a lot to get me to read anything on this website. It says a lot about the quality of your writing that I was able to read your fic here. I really enjoyed this. Well done. :)

Great fic!

This is... Just so... I love you. You are amazing. This is incredibly perfect and so wonderfully unique. Brilliant and adorable!

Great start !

Nice one.

What more can I say that I loved this! Great job, and I'm off to read the sequel!

Kind Regards,~ Gg

I love it

Great! It's so cute how Harvey goes to Rene more often just to see Mike :)

I really like it!

loved it! I love Harvey going back time after time for Mike and counting! And Mike telling him to "ask me"...loved it, thanks for sharing! :-)

finally mike's claiming some ownership of mike...sort of. I like it when mike is possessive of harvey. It's sexy

great story, I love the different take on how Mike and Harvey could have met. I love this story!

I will forever be your greatest fan because your writing truly is amazing, but this is not your best work. I normally don't mind AU stories, but this seemed off for some reason... Regardless, I still love you to death(:

This story was great. But it would be so much better with smut scenes.