Past two chapters were really good! You should definitely keep going, working through fears is supposed to be good for us. Or so I've been told. This was definitely an awkward episode to watch, I'm impressed that you have the courage to tackle it at all. I don't think I could do it nearly so well.

I reaqlly love John and Sherlock's dynamics. I would write something more profound but I'm sleepy as heck. Keep going strong )

Great chapter!

Yeah thats Sherlock alright. Good writing very in character

You're doing a good job with this story. I like the different POVs.

Hey if you're still looking for a beta I might be able to help. Looking forward to what comes next. :)

I am loving this story and if you are still looking for a beta, I could help.

I caught up tonight on all 10 chapters. I find ur writing very well done and I appreciate the care u take in keeping everyone in character. I agree with ur notes on the first post. I will be watching this with great interest

heyi really like this story! please do keep goin and it was most definently interesting :)

:) please continue

~NH

Lol, just realised my last reviewed was without signing up, well, that was me in case it wasn't completely totally obvious :P

Heh, a GPS on Sherlock, what a great idea. He could have one inserted on his neck like the identification chip my cat has XP Oh, how he would hate that. Sherlock loves to have the control, I can think of few things that would annoy him more :P

Sherlock has indeed a big impact on John form forgetting to it to being fascinated by his work to answer to his "childish" requests. The scene in which Sherlock tries to make John remember is quite cool and John is great for having taken the picture.

I loved how in the original first book, John (well it sounded better Dr Watson then :P) tried to figure out his flatmate's profession by his knowledge. IT was fun as heck.

It is indeed quite a feat to be a normal person and not get out running and screaming because of Sherlock *smirk*

It does seem like Watson is attached to Sherlock, like a natural attraction. It's curious how he explains to himself what Sherlock brings to their lives.

"Being John Watson seemed like the sane thing to do" XP Heheh, Sherlock's voice is sexy, I agree with him :P

The last scenes were cool, well done John for getting the check paid and smashing that smug face out of Sebastian. Also, nice you realise Sherlock loves to help, not just puzzles :) That last moment with Watson not wanting Sherlock to see the graffiti was sweet. Watson worries about Sherlock quite a lot by now :)

Sherlock is a bit of a dram queen *Smirk* so of course he gets all the good moments XP

Two more chappies to read, cool _

Heheh, I've been angry/paying my frustration with machines before :P Not the healthiest thing to do but relieves stress nonetheless. Usually the more serious the person is, the more they explode when they do lose their temper. IT's no good to keep everything bottled up.

I had always thought Sherlock ordered people around because of a mix of disregard for humans in general plus intellectual elitism but yeah, his upbringing as a high class kid probably played a major influence and made him even more unable to notice how utterly "bratty" he comes across to the rest of the universe.

I agree that John would find it very uncomfortable to ask for money even if he's pretty confident Sherlock wouldn't mind (although getting Sherlock centered enough to give him the money might be problematic. It's not a case after all XP). I don't know why but John talking about being the sidekick of Sherlock has reminded of that so awful is funny old Batman and Robin TV series with real actors *smirk*

Aww, I get sad thinking Sherlock has no mates (although he probably doesn't) but now he has John and he is as loyal as a hound :)

Hahah, even compared to Sebastian, "hearing" John called Sherlock cuddly is just too funny and sweet to let it pass :P

Nice to see John getting a job and meeting Sarah. Also we got his perspective on the whole strangling thing :P It was a cool chappie even if John didn't knwo almsot anything that was going on. Poor frustrated John, he gets his bearings soon and kicks ass :)

True true, this was not as good as your other chapters, but I understand it is hard to write from different p.o.v. continuesly.

~NH

The subtitle of the chapter is funny in itself, Sherlock out of balance and trying to be polite :P Let's see what we have here :)

Poor Molly, having a crush on Sherlock must be the worst :P and for Sherlock is useful but at the same time hell because he doesn't know how to handle it adequately :P

Sherlock is such a micro-managing bastard :P He needs to "asses" his date, check out she is not going to "cause disturbances".

It was cool that Sherlock admitted he needed back up and he actually refrained himself a lot :P I cracked up when he looked at John admitting he was way reluctant to say we don't know XP

Sherlock about to strangle Sarah in 3, 2, 1 ... :P I loved how he said that he didn't react because John wouldn't get only "cute angry" at him XP

I love how Sherlock and John are getting closer and closer :) Looking forward to the next chappie.

Awww, Sherlock is cute thinking John is cute and worrying about him 3 It's so funny they are both "manipulating" the other for the other's own good without realising the other's "manipulation" :P

Only Sherlock can feel like cheating when getting John's password but not guilty of using it without asking :)

Sebastian was really rued (it's been a long while since I saw the episodes so I didn't remember it). Sherlock played it good by not accepting the check.

The rant about climbing was fun and in general it's nice to follow hsi thoughts that aren't normally explained in the series :) Of course Shelock would consider asking in the shop, cheating :P

I loved the attack scene in the TV series and this time around too but not for the same reasons. Sherlock still needs to elarn to play on a team (will he ever? :P) and he doesn't want to appear defenceless.

Still much to read :)