I think this is cute. What I like is that you see the Walter in Peter really clearly.

OMG! I loved this story! When I found out that they were going to start the fifth season twenty years into the future, I was sad. I wanted to see how their lives progressed. This story did that perfectly for me. Thank you so much!

Jesus christ, child. If I would have known that giving you suggestions would produce... this, I would have suggested more things ages ago.
Does science work for you? Here's more science words, atoms, gravity, mass, protons, electrons, neutrons, electricity (actually...), neurons, brains, skin, oranges...
I don't know. I just want more. MOOOAR. I'm a greedy soul.

But seriously, that was incredibly lovely. More than lovely. At first I was like DA FUQ OLIVIA? WHERE B PETAAAAAH. Turns out he's right there. Waiting and willing to seduce unsuspecting readers... I mean, women with cortexiphan powers, with science.
Damn you, science. STOP MAKING THINGS SO APPEALING WITH YOUR LOGIC.

And your choice of words, darling. Beautiful. Absolutely gorgeous. I sighed. Then got rather flustered. Then sighed again. Then started at it. Then gaped at it. Then scrolled up a bit to reread again to fully absorb it. Then giggled. Then scrolled up to reread. Then read the rest. Giggled. And scrolled up to reread again.

But that's just briefly describing what I did.

Ugh, I wish I had this talent. Or your lovely, imagination and humour. And UGH YOU'RE JUST TOO LOVELY. I DON'T DESERVE YOUR WRITES.

Love you!

I'm so glad you updated! This was great! I hope you don't make it soo long before your next one!

Ok. So. I've been quietly stalking this story for a while (quietly because I didn't know it was you), and I figured I should at least leave a tiny, tiny, tiny review, seeing as you've graced my writing with manuscripts of praise that I don't deserve. Be warned, I suck at leaving reviews saying something other than "FLAIL OMG AWESOME KBAI".
In this particular chapter, I really liked the...I'll call it magical...sense of your narrative. Your descriptions gave me the kind of feeling you get during the holidays, when you're out with friends and family on new year's eve seeing the snow fall, and there's this air of nostalgia hanging around in the night. It's a good feeling. And I loved the "stranger in a bar on hen's night" kind of thing. I knew it was Peter from the start, but hey, it was fun. And PEE. That is all.

FLAIL OMG AWESOME KBAI.

Loved these, isn't Asterid a sneaky little minx! Lots of lol moments and pure sweet POLIVIA what more could we ask? Glad I found this, thanks for sharing

You write so beautifully. I love your descriptions. I was hoping it was Peter the whole time and I am so glad it was! I laughed at the her having to pee part because it reminded me of the car conversation right before she got abducted.

Looking forward to more!

OH YOU! YOU EVIL LITTLE THING. You actually DID get me for a little while there! I was all 'uhm, okay Olivia, it's your hen night, you're feeling brave, you're talking to strangers, IT'S FINE' and then he was following her and I was like "OMFG RUN OLIVIA RUN", but then I realized it was Peter (BEFORE she said his name, I'm giving myself some credit lmao), but yeah, YOU MINX! Omfg the sound that came out of my mouth with the dildos part thought DEAR GAWD it will keep me laughing for a while! :')

This was absolutely lovely, darling, SO ABSOLUTELY LOVELY! Such a perfect reward after my crazy sprint, you have no idea, I hadn't read any P/O in almost 2 weeks, too lost in Olivia/Etta land, and this just was all sort of delicious and so sweet and steamy...CAR SEX AH! You stopped it too soon xD

Thank you so much, for being the wonderful human being that you are, for being a great writer, and for putting a huge grin on face :') LOVE YOU BABE!

OMG. I am beating myself up. I have been meaning to read your story for MONTHS, literally, but I have a tendency to just put off things. I finally dove in, and thought I would wait until I read everything to review, BUT I CAN'T. I CANNOT WAIT. THIS ONE HAD ME IN TEARS, LIKE GROSS, SOBBING TEARS OF P/O HAPPINESS. My heart is bursting with love, omg this was so beautiful, and HILARIOUS, I mean Ella, SHE KILLED ME, it was so perfect, I was laughing like an idiot, and next thing I knew I was making weird sounds while crying loudly. There is absolutely no best way to start the day :')

The two previous stories were wonderful, too, I cannot believe I didn't know until now what a FABULOUS writer you are, I mean, I should have known, even the messages you write are beautiful, BUT I AM SO HAPPY I FINALLY READ THIS. Or 3 chapters of it anyway xD You'll definitely hear from me again.

You owe me tissues. Seriously though, this was divinely perfect :')

I loved it...I'm so glad you updated :)

You did such a great job with the Olivia's anticipatory buildup to finding out that Peter was okay. I could feel her growing anguish.

I am enjoying your style of writing. Your descriptions come across very clear and make it easy to visualize what it is you are writing about. Great comparison between Olivia and the butterfly.

I'm not usually a huge fan of fluff n stuff, but I must admit this one made me heave a big huge awwwww. Ella was perfect as the comic relief and that was such a great way for him to actually pop the question.

awwww cute! i want to see this happen!

Much joy to see this being updated! I've been too busy with school and writing to read a lot of fanfictions as of late, but I'll always make time for this one!

Anyway, this was adorable! SMOOTHIE MAKE OUT YAAAAAAAY. And Walter called them hooligans. LOL I WANT TO SEE IT. Him calling them nincompoops would be just as great though :D

Thanks for writinggg!

Jolly