can't help to imagine both trunks and goten as Chibis liked in the buu saga through out this story though actually they should be teenager or almost 20(?) right? maybe because other people keep calling them kid or just the fact that I'm not used reading fanfiction about teen goten and trunks as main characters.. if it is goten and Trunks' fic, most of the time I've read is the Chibis one..

but whatever it is, I liked this story!

you know i must say this, this is the best au story in dbz that i've ever read, no mushy2 romance,no annoying oc, and i live the bromance between goten and trunks

I just finished your story in a couple days because I could not keep my eyes off the screen because it was so good. honestly I was on edge throughout the entire thing. one of the best fanfics I have ever read. 10/10 my friend

It's not that I'm lazy or anything. But I feel like nothing can express my gratitude for this fic more than simple words. It's satisfying. In-character. Tying loose ends. Definitely a favorite. It could be longer and more fleshed out for sure, but that'd be like a total novel. This is still great.

This is great. This fanfic is great.

No...don't let this end...six more...

18 YES. THANK YOU. I rarely see her fight and her strength is above many others damn it.

I'd like to pause for a moment to tell you how amazing this fic is so far, and I'm sure it will continue to be. It's the most well-written DBZ fic I've read and I've been LOOKING for weeks. Exposition is wonderful. Characters just play out naturally without the rambling most fics end up doing.

This was pretty fun. Thanks for writing it.

i wonder if vegeta will train trunks and when and if the truth will ever come out that trunks is rely vegetas son.

i bed it has something to do with training .being that he is vegeta and he was scanning his power level.

I had a lot of fun reading this story. Good work.

Just thought I'd let you know that I love this story with a passion. I usually stay away from AU's because they're normally unfinished and annoyingly OOC, but this one was different. I could tell after reading the first chapter and you had me hooked. This was great! Not only was it well written, but it was completely unique. I love how you portrayed Goten and Trunks' relationship, and I love that you included Bardock! Man, this story was so awesome! I'm so glad it's finished!

I LUVD LUVD LUVD it! PLZ rite a sequel! PLZ PLZ PLZ rite a sequel! U culd lik strt out wen trunks is bout 2 b kng u no? All in all VERY entertaining heartfelt a downright funy! Gud job!

Okay, I'm late to the party but I still wanted to let you know that this fic is amazing. I've read it in a matter of hours and I hope I'll find the time to review every. single. freaki. chapter. because there's so much I liked. Is too much to hope for a sequel? Well, it's an amazing story anyways and I loved. Just sayin. Thank you for making my day