Reviews for The Forgotten Doll
Guest chapter 5 . 1/24/2015
So sad. Great writing! Hope you continue.
ktikat13 chapter 5 . 3/22/2013
Aww this is so sad but good but I don't see how this is a Maria and Michael story
bjq chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
DAn was the rapist?
BrownieStick chapter 5 . 9/27/2012
I really hope you update soon. So wanna know what'll happen next.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
I am enjoying this immensely. I check back from time to time to see if it has been up-dated. I do sincerely hope that you continue.
georginasakura chapter 5 . 6/9/2012
heyyy this is a really great story i liked how u built other characters like liz a storyline too rather tan focusing just on the main character cant wait for micheal to come into it
Lackadaisical Pajamas chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
I feel like i do remeber this fic even though i read it years ago...a good thing is hard to forget. i like it as much as im sure i liked it then. thanks for bringing it back looking forward to more!
sonia62 chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
this story is beautiful, complex and so well written. There aren't a lot of story regarding maria and michael nowadays, please keep writing!
Carfa chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
great story. Can't wait for the next part!
CaptainJacksGirl13 chapter 5 . 4/23/2012
Hi, I was reading your story, and i must say that it was...FANTASTIC! very well written, and verry emotional. Reading your story was like being on an emotional rollercoaster! One moment I was happy, netx second, I was litteraly sobing! Please post more, I can't get over how amazing your story is! please please please wriite more! I don't say that to too many people, because sometimes I can't manage to reade their writing, but yours i really liked! WRITE MORE!

-Aly Smith
bjq chapter 3 . 3/16/2012
LOVE IT! Is the neighbor the one who raped Maria? Where is Micheal? Will Micheal and Maria get back together? PLease update soon. FABULOUS!
Graceface55 chapter 3 . 3/16/2012
So glad to see you'd updated! I'd almost forgotten all about this little gem. :)

I really liked this chapter, so sad! :( I kinda expected it to have something to do with a Liz/Max kid but I didn't see the parents thing coming into play.

But still I liked it, despite the sadness. Poor Liz! :(

I hope you update soon I'm interested to see what happens and who Maria's father was... hmmm...
msv713 chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
Amazing story. I'm very interested to see where this is going to go. Like it very much so far.
geneva8403 chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Great start. But I really wanna knkow whats going on so please update soon! lol
Starfish chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
Keep going :)
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