This is wonderful imagery and use of the surroundings scenery as well as subtle inner thoughts.

beautiful!

This was so lovely. Just like Gendry, our fictions are babies too. And this one is a beauty!

Wow that was so sad and so beautiful. The way to described Gendry's opinion of himself was just so perfect . There was this shyness and humbleness about it that just works for him . great work I can't wait to read your future works :)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE - seriously I could type that all day- PLEASE continue this story! I adore the Gendry you've caputured it just fits so perfectly it makes me want to weep, seriously I am seriously deprived of Genry Arya FF - I mean eventually I will write my own once all the kinks in the plot have been worked out an dall the Chapters drafted but please give a direwolf a bone! or a horn :D - if you dnt futher this could you atleast pm if you're doing any new ASoIaF especially AryaX Gendry FF ?

THis is awesome Gendry PoV PLEASE - ok now I'm just sounding desperate XD but seriously great character imitation and the writing on the stream of consiousness is good too at time a bit shallow but the simplicity fits this story in this moment - hope that was constructive enough besides my raving :D

Incredibly cute. I love it.

As someone who ADORES Arya/Gendry, I must say that I LOVED this xD Good work.

I LOVE this. There are so few stories told from Gendry's perspective, but it never occurred to me to wonder why before I read this story. I really like the sensory phrasing in here- the descriptions of the forge in the first paragraph is particularly vivid. And the whole relationship between Gendry and Arya is wonderful and perfect- he acknowledges that she's a lady, higher-born than him, but instead of dwelling on it, he gives her whatever is in his power to give. Excellent, excellent work!