it was good but i hope that the sequel is is the story really over? I wish it weren't. :(

No a offense but skystar or sky is a Tom not a she -cat

Can you put the link-up of you can? I think the ”SQUEAL IS UP NOW!” is the link but it won't work!

very very very good.

I'm pretty sure that the part of the prophecy is the part of the lyrics from the song 'Angel of darkness'. Isn't it? Och, and I'm sorry if I offended someone.

COME ON FIREPAW-STAR-YOU ALMOST HAVE HIM!

Oh dear lord please help me with this chapter.
I hate to criticize people and i swear you are doing a good job with the story. Only I am so confused. There are some grammar issues and I ask that you reread before you post, lots of words came in different sentences and it through me off completely. I had to go back at least a paragraph to try and comprehend what was going on. All i ask is for you to fix you scenes to make sure they make since. Keep up the good work!

It's actually ridiculously clear why the information the Elder's just shared would irritate Firepaw to the extreme. He'd seen practically everything they mentioned during his own reign as leader of Thunderclan. For that matter, more often than not he was the one to accept such cats into the clan even if, due to their heritage, he shouldn't. Still wow, his father is part kittypet, neither parent of his mother is of Thunderclan decent, the names of Dustpaw and Sandpaws parents were changed not to mention a she-cat having borne the kits of a non Thunderclan tom. If anything it just tells me that the chance of a cat born of Thunderclan to actually be of pure Thunderclan descent is next to zero. Especially not with all the cats Firepaw, then star, accepted into the clan himself. Wow, the only pair that I can think of who might actually be of pure Thunderclan descent who were still alive neither the end of Firestar's time would be Dustpelt and Ferncloud.

I'm confused. This is actually a third re-reading and I noticed one thing that strikes me as odd. Way later on isn't it specifically mentioned that only Windclan seems to recall the stories of the past? If that is the case why does Nightstar know of the battle that at least half the reincarnated cats died in? Based on the fact that even the names of the Elders of each clan don't ring a bell tells me that this story as a whole must take place way in the future. In fact the only cat who seems as though they might've been alive when Firestar died is Ivystar of Shadowclan. If I recall there was a cat in Shadowclan at the time by the name of Ivytail.

I don't like how many phopacys there are. But I'm still interested to see how it turns out. You did a good job writing this but I have one question. Why did you make all the kits have their old names when their mum's named them? To me it just doesn't make any sense.
Can you please explain the reason to me soon? -Collbie Stewart

I loved reading this story! The plot was very detailed and well thought out!

I cried so much during the fight but felt so strong when the star clan cats helped dark forest and other way around.

If you are going to name them there warrior names I wonder if you will name them their real names or different ones

nooooooooooooooooooo! Not these dum cats again

I'm sure that shadowclan cat was wondering how a kit new all those moves