Really liked this, thought it was well written and wasn't choppy at all

aaawwww so cute! Almost made my cry when they were reliving Rocco's death... Long Live Rocco! -cries-

The thing I like the most about this story is the cadence. You had great pacing through out and at no point did things feel like they were going too fast. The twins interactions were great, and I liked the imagery of their dad being baffled by an emotional Murphy. Great work!

What exquisite emotional writing. Your use of detail made the characterization work, and it felt like an in-between scene that would have suited the movie. I loved it and enjoyed reading a quality BDS fic that did not insist on being melodramatic or gimmicky.

So excited to read more of your BDS work!

Poor Murphy. I like how much emotion you put into this. Please please please tell me you'll write another chapter.