Wtf is wrong with Dusk! She knows what Imogene is, she should know not to accept a drink from her - especially when she was pre-warned that people spiked drinks at that party!

Silly, silly girl!

Their conversations are so formal, I feel like they're back in the 19th century.

EMBRY & ANGELA.
.LOVE.

I get the impression you're British - well, not American - because of the way you've laid out the schooling system (primary, high school, year 10).

This is amazingly written, but I have to mention the "they're, their, there" and "your, you're" problem you have. You need to check you're using the right one, because so far, you haven't been.

love it this story was great

OMFG! THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AWESOME, ACTION-PACKED, ROMANTIC AND UNDENIABLY GREAT STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! IN THE PART WHERE SARAH SHOUTED 'QUILEUTE!', I CAN ALREADY IMAGINE THE SHAPE SHIFTERS LOOKING AT THE DIRECTION OF THE SIGNAL AND RUNNING TO COLORADO WITH SOME SORT OF SAVE-THE-WORLD BACKGROUND MUSIC! I WILL READ THE SEQUEL NOWWWWWWWW! AHHHHHH! :)))

Her mother is Jamaican! Something different. I have family from Jamaica, so I'm a little excited about that. I think I'm gonna love this story.

its all happening

Oh my gosh please update soon! And if I'm right, is it Imogene who is making Dusk's mom sick? If do, you should totally have Dusk find Imogene and have a whole supernatural witch fight thing. I think is would be really cool. Please update soon!

Oh...My...GOD UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! NOW! PLEASE

You are a awesome person but you are also mean jk jk but how can u leave me hanging like that. I hav so many many mixed emotions right now and there all because of... so thank you! I will follow you until you stop writing, you are awesome I'm attracted to ur awesomeness and forever will be! Love ya and can't wait for PART 2 of DITD!

Ha you think it's late where you are :P
It's freshers week here and I am a fresher :D
Infact whilst I was trying to read this on my iPod a group of guys nicked on our door and came in with shopping bags full of alcohol so I had to stop reading, then when they wanted my iPod to listen to music on the guy plugging it into the speakers was like 'what's this writing?' So obviously he got the answere words but apparently this wasn't enough and so I said it was fanfiction, there'd never heard of ff! So I said it was an awesome story written by awesome girls :D
But anyway about the story I really loved the way that you got in both sides of dusk and jakes relationship (evil eyes across the table and the I won't ever leave you cause I love you so much :) ) into one chapter :)
But the ending ! How can you do that to me! Now I'm going to be waiting for the next chapter and really worried about dusk and what jake is going to say about zack or to zack! What if he's really mean to him cause of sienna?
And I really want to know if jake really imprinted on sienna or whether it was dusk and he didn't realise it?! What if he just assumed it was si cause he didn't think he would imprin on dusk?
And I can't wait for the sequel ! I'm so exited ! I assume its another one that the both if you are writing together :) your going to be such brilliant authors when you do publish :)

Oh and incase you didn't realise from above I'm now at uni so that could mean that I don't always have time to reply or it could be that I have loads of free time and I may even put up the story that I've been kind of writing :) it just depends on life and how much work I have to do ... But I promise that if the reply isn't immediate then it will be coming :)
I'm doing Animal Behaviour at Chester Uni which sounds as amazing as it is :) tomorrow I'm going to a safari park :D and ever Friday we go to a minny zoo and for that we need to ware boiler suits and steel toe capped boots so it sound like we'll be doing loads of interesting stuff :D
Anyway enough rambling from me :P and I hope that the next chapter/ sequel will be posted soon :)

AWW love it! Can't wait for the next one! :D

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

Ooooh. Definately into it. Love the little part in the end in the third person point of view. .