| Reviews for All Beginnings |
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CrystalAris chapter 19 . 7/25 Oh... I forgot bee and Jazz... well legs vs half, but damn it Jazz... I hope he’ll come back and I hope she’ll become Cybertron |
CrystalAris chapter 19 . 7/25 ... jazz... T.T |
CrystalAris chapter 8 . 7/25 I’m normally not a big fan of a bee romance, but this is adorably priceless! Fluffy! |
Derplord2.0 chapter 40 . 6/9 Now I’m curious what do valves mean in cybertronian |
Nursing student chapter 18 . 11/24/2019 All was good until the end. YOU DON’T PULL OUT THE SHARD! You leave it in because that’s only thing stoping you from bleeding out. With the shard in there, you just got something where it’s not supposed to be. It’s stopping the bleeding from happening and if it punctured the lungs it’s stopping you from having a pneumothorax and ruining your breathing pattern. Without it, you have a direct entry into the wound and the lungs probably, and you can’t breathe normally and will bleed out faster. Oh ma gawd. Lol |
Love chapter 7 . 5/17/2019 Bitch you quoted Robin Williams AND Aladdin in the same chapter?! And yes, those are the two I'm focusing on all you people that read the comments! |
Love chapter 5 . 5/17/2019 Loveing this already! I'm always looking for Bumblebee x oc that has the oc helping Bee find Sam! I was so excited when I saw this I almost squealed and scared the slag out of my sleeping fam! |
Megatronus666 chapter 42 . 12/26/2018 Russ Cargill: (Levels a shotgun at Homer and Bart) Hello, Homer. Homer Simpson: So, we meet at last, whoever you are. Russ Cargill: There's a couple of things they don't teach you in Harvard Business School, one is how to cope with defeat, the other is how to handle a shotgun, I'm going to do both right now. Bart Simpson: Wait! But if you kill my dad, you'll never know where the treasure is buried! Russ Cargill: What treasure? Bart Simpson: Uhm, the treasure of Ima Wiener. Russ Cargill: I'm a wiener? (Homer and Bart laugh) Homer Simpson: Classic! Russ Cargill: Well, always leave them laughing. Goodbye, sir. (Cargill aims the shotgun, right as he is about to fire a boulder falls on him KOing him, the camera pans up to show Maggie) Homer Simpson: Maggie! What a great little accident you turned out to be! (Maggie winks and does a hand gun at Homer) |
Megatronus666 chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Who would you have play Alise? |
Megatronus666 chapter 31 . 12/26/2018 Glen: Get off my grandmama's carpet! She don't like nobody on the carpet! Especially police! |
Megatronus666 chapter 18 . 12/26/2018 The jet is named Blackout and the Buffalo MPV is Bonecrusher. (MPV stands for mine protected vehicle) |
AkageIsumi chapter 8 . 12/26/2018 Hi there, just wanted to say... nice story so far but I even would appreciate the romance part more if the development of it would need weeks instead of mere days. Even though... a sweet story so far. |
Guest chapter 13 . 11/10/2018 Mmm I would have had her kick Simmons where it hurts. |
baukey2022 chapter 14 . 5/24/2018 You know what I need? This chapter from Bee’s POV. I’m really curious of what was going through his head after Alise was tased |
AstroNeko3000 chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 the ending sucks! |