i adore this. So sad, but SO beautifully done!

This is incredible! I really like this look at River's childhood from the Doctor's perspective. I escpecially like the descriptions of Amy and Rory as "red and Roman". The entire thing is so well written, it sounds almost like a poem or a song (pun not intended), but it's written in prose. Anywho (pun intended), I really, really like this story. Any chance of a sequel, or a view of River's childhood from Amy or Rory's perspective? You did a great job, and I'd like to see more!