It's lovely to see you post again. Please continue :)

I love this so far! Poor ace! He's gonna be heartbroken! But I hope it all works out and smoace happens! :)

thank you for the update and i hope smokey realize that he is in love with ace :)

i loved it a lot and yay somkey cares about ace :)

Yeah! A knew chapter! Please update soon!:)

I think: I want more!

I LOVE Smoker, he's so CUUUTTTEEE!

Aaaw. Poor smoker doesn't know his about to hurt his own feelings too. Plz continue!

Welcome back! :)
Up to now, I've been a silent reader and fan of your story, but I think it's only fair to let you know my opinion, isn't it? I'm just sorry I can only do it anonymously, I LOVE it when authors answer reviews!

First of all, thank you for existing! You don't know how happy I am that someone is still writing a SmoAce long-fic! I really needed it, thank you so much!
Since the mistakes you've made have been already pointed out, just a humble suggestion that you can completely ignore: maybe you should change the summary. You don't have to explain that Smoker wants to use Ace or make any big revelations, maybe just hint at them, mention Blackbeard or Smoker's plan, something like that. I hope that didn't sound too rude, I didn't mean to.
Ok, now that I'm done with the suggestions, I can freely compliment you! Really, how did you have this idea? It's totally awesome, I love it! I had never read something like this nor did I expect it, so I'm even more excited and curious!
I simply love how you depict the characters. They're my OTP, but their relationship in this ff is beautiful, sweet, heart-breaking - in one word: awesome!

I hope this doesn't sound too mushy, I'm just really happy and I love this fic to pieces!
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters ;)

Smoker, you (cute) evil bastard, don't you dare make poor little Ace suffer!

Well, actually, that's not correct: I do want Ace to suffer, so Smoker will suffer too (because he loves him U.U), making the story even more interesting than it already is!

But what I'd really like to see is Ace's reaction (it's heartbreaking to know that he truly loves Smoker and at the same time know that he'll have to suffer), how will he react when he finds out that his love is just using him? But that will have to wait, I guess, because Smoker has yet to actually use him to get to Blackbeard... By the way, I can't wait to see them fighting Blackbeard, or whatever will happen between them and that fat guy... Aaahh, I'm curious!

You know what I really liked about this chapter? The fact that I already feel sorry for Ace (and for Smoker too, because, as I said, he'll suffer too). He's too damn sweet, he does not deserve to be used and then to suffer!

In conclusion, I'm glad you're free now, and of course thank you for updating!

i loved it a lot

and Smoker is a bad boy

playing with cute little Ace like that

hope you update sooooooooooooooon

Oh, an update!

So Smoker is just using poor Ace? Nah, I don't think so, it's more likely that he'll fall in love with him (or he altready has)! It's getting really interesting, now I'm even more curious!

I think that Smoker informing Tashigi about his plan is something he would actually do, but she's a girl (or better, a yaoi fangirl), and as such, she immediately thinks he loves Ace back! That scene was priceless!

You updated! Thank you :)

Please take into account that I'm not English, but I think I noticed some mistakes.

"The sun shone on the two males that was sleeping soundly, uncaring that if anyone walks into the room they would both be in serious trouble."

You didn't make this mistake often this time, but sometimes you use the present tense instead of the past (walks) and you use a singular verb where there should be a plural one (was sleeping).

"Ace resumed his activity, sucking on his cock at incredible speed the marine captain had to throw back his head and let out a low moan of pleasure."

You should separate some sentences. For example, in this case you could say something along the lines of "[...] sucking on his cock at incredible speed. The marine captain had to throw back his head [...]", or "[...] sucking on his cock at incredible speed, making the marine captain throw back his head [...]".

"Ace turned around just in time to see two pairs of arms wrap itself around his body."

Shouldn't it be "a pair of arms" (unless Smoker has four arms XD)? Anyway, if Smoker did have four arms, I think it should be "themselves".

"He gestured Ace to go in."

Shouldn't it be "to gesture for/to s.o. to do s.t."?

Don't worry, though. I'm sure that if you re-read what you write carefully or you get a beta, you'll no longer make these mistakes ;)

Possibility of me making mistakes while pointing out yours: 100% :)

As for this chapter... so kawaii!

Uhm, sorry.

Even if he's just using him, I like it when Smoker worries about Ace, it's really sweet! They're cute when they're affectionate, and a shower together is always nice (and hot)!

I also like the way you use adjectives such as "small, lithe, thin" to describe Ace, because they emphasize the differences between them.

I love the description of Ace's feelings, it never fails to warm up my little fangirl heart, and Ace dragging Smoker through the town was priceless!

As for the end... S-Smoker-tan, how can you say something like that ç_ç You have to listen to Tashigi, she's a wise girl and, more importantly, she's right: you'll end up hurting Ace-chan's feelings as well as yours!

Joking aside, I like Smoker and Tashigi's relationship. I think she's IC, because at first she can’t believe her ears, but then she asks if he loves Ace back (3), and in the end she obeys him because she trusts him.

...I'm positive Tashigi is a SmoAce fan, though...

BUT! We know that Smoker feels the same way as Ace, he admitted it in the previous chapter, so I'm sure there'll be a happy ending – there has to be!

I'm really glad you updated, but please take your time, the important thing is that you'll finish this fic, because I want to know what will happen :)

What! Smoker is just using Ace! Oh no thats bad...

Hi :) I've just re-read your fic for the... sixth time, I guess. I think others have already pointed out the mistakes you've made, so now I can only tell you how much I like this fic! I don't have much to add to what has already been said, but I'll try!

Sometimes the characters are a bit OOC, but they're so cute! I like how you describe them! And a virgin Ace is always so sweet to read about!

I like how you described the relationship between them, and I'm really really curious about Smoker's plan, I hope they'll collaborate ;)

I love this fic, I hope you haven't abandoned it and that, with the holidays, you'll be able to write again :)