This was really great but i think at the end where it says "They're always brave and I can't mourn them all." I think you should change "and" to "but", other than that it is great.

The "I've known so many..." is consistently brilliant. The last two stanzas in particular killed me.

The rhythm is so much more cheerful than the words, kind of like "Song for Ten" or some of the other sounds on the real soundtracks.

YOU MAKE ME CRY. In a good way. :)

Okay, lemme see: Jamie, K-9, Barbara and Ian, Leela? (but I don't think she's a sailor, so never mind), Peri?, Sarah Jane, Donna, Romana, and a programmer?

Very sad, very true, and very, very well written- an absolutely beautiful poem that definitely belongs on my favorites.

Another very beautiful one. I am just about to eagerly go through your poetry, as you suggested am Very excited! :D Well done on this, it was wonderful!

Okay, time to test my classic who knowledge.

gallant ScotsmanJamie

dogs cybernetic K9, mark I, II, and possibly III and IV if you count Sarah Jane's models

Flight attendantsTegan

ReporterSarah Jane

TempDonna

Programmer maybe Zoe...not quite sure

But it's a beautiful mix of humor and sadness, that paticular mix that is at the heart of Doctor Who.

Really clever!

And just for my own edification: is it Jamie, K-9, Ian & Barbara, Ben, Tegan, Sarah Jane, Donna, Mel, Romana/Susan?

Very, very good. Catches the burden of the timelord quite well.