I'm so glad I found this, I was actually depressed most of the day because I thought you had just ended with Akito dying and Ryoko being misrable. Aside from a few grammar errors, no real complaints, a satisfying and entertaining read through and through. I was beginning to wonder if I was the only one who cared for Akito x Ryoko after watching the series again a week or so ago. Thanks again for sharing your story with us! It made my day to know it had a happy ending.

Very nicely done.

Well I read this online and I must say that it's a beautiful work of art. Honestly, I needed closure watching "Prince of Darkness" and this provided it.
You provided it by 1. Having Akito get back his senses in a believable way. 2. Getting Ruri away in a "nice" manner from that weirdo computer guy (good for him! I like him but not with Ruri) 3. resolving the war more believably. 4. I also love Ruri-Akitoness
While I'm going to pretend Akito got back with Yurika, I think it was a great fic. Ryoko deserves some happiness too.

I've read all three of your series stories, and I must say that these are unquestionable the best Nadesico fanfiction I have ever read, and probably in my top ten of all time. Thank you for a wonderful story.

This series was just beautiful. It brang a tear to my eye. Hope ya write more like it!

Brilliant, more importantly finialy someone who is Pro-Ryoko, in my opinion by far the best (and deserving) character in Nadesico. Although it is harsh on Yurika she is annoying and Ryoko is much nicer all round (and less insaine)

...and now I hate Lapis too! Ugh. Or at least I did when I read this. Have I mentioned lately that you are God? *is not worthy* It was a nice close... that is, it IS a trilogy, right? Damn I wish I could type.

Yes. You are god. *bows*

Ok, I would Review all three fics seperately but I'm a Lazy Lazy man 8P. anywho, one word springs to mind when I think of this Trillogy, Fantastic. this is great sir, you are da man :). I've aready added you to my fave authors list.

Write more Nadesico stuff please.

YOU BASTARD! Why did you have Akito with Ryoko? It sould have been Akito with Yurika! I will never read this in my life!

YOU BASTARD! Why did you have Akito with Ryoko? It sould have been Akito with Yurika! I will never read this in my life!

YOU BASTARD! Why did you have Akito with Ryoko? It sould have been Akito with Yurika! I will never read this in my life

All right first I'm a big Tenchi Muyo and Evangelion Fan!

Now after i started collecting them, Af riend gave me his VHS tapes of Nadiesco to tape and I have the whole series. I haven't seen the movie but from what I've gathered it didn't continue in the spirit of the series, rather it was more Evangelion in plot and excecution. That really pissed me off.

Now with that said, I love the paring of either Akito/Yurika, for the obvious reasons, and the Akito/Ryoko for the reasons I said before in this story lines previos chapters.

Now As I said before I think of all the girls Ryoko deserves Akito's love more than any of them with the exception of Yurika.

If there was a Way for Akito's personality to make it work, I think he would have made it work with both even if he could not have leagally married them. But I write Tenchi stories where he's married to both Ayeka, and that Series' Ryoko, so what am I to say.

In ancient Japan as it was accepted throughout Asia, Men who could afford it, had more than One wife, or a main wife and a concubine or two.

But modern society looks down on this with very real reasons for it.

But this is Anime, you know make believe!

But Coming to realize that Tenkawa wouldn't like to hurt the girls he would have either left or married one. Oh well, Some series can do the mulyi-wife thing better than others.

Just continue to give Ryoko her due.

Of all the girls She was the one I most liked.

dennisud

that was a good story

Great stuff man, your storytelling was great. For a fanfic, you made it more depressing than the series its based on without making it a real darkfic.

I've read the preceding stories in this series of yours, yes I know it's been asked of you before and it IS a stupid question, but is this the end of this series, making it a trilogy. I want to know if I have something to look for in the Nadesico sector of fanfiction anytime soon.

Kudos to you buddy.

FINALLY! I was about to flame you for hurting my favorite character (Ryoko Subaru) like you did at the end of "Rings"! But now, you have not only redeemed yourself in the eyes of Cristian, the Lord of Paladins, but did in a fantastic fashion! Great Trilogy!