Reviews for Broken Palace
Guest chapter 24 . 8/12
Die Damon diiiiie
Guest chapter 19 . 8/12
Worst than Katherine ?! You piece of shit you RAPED her !
I cannot believe this, he disgust me, he is disgusting
That man is pure trash, I never saw such a monster not even owning his shit!
erotica38 chapter 25 . 6/6
That was soooo tragic. It was a very well written story.
mikjenl08 chapter 25 . 2/10/2019
Truthfully, I hated the ending! You wanted honesty. So here it is! But it couldn’t have gone any other way because you had him rape her, something Damon Salvatore would have never done even in his most violent state of compulsion, he’d never rape a woman. So you did pretty much predict your end when you did that. You made Mason a murderer, Damon a rapist, Stefan Complacent, Caroline an Accessory-before-the-fact, Tyler a vigilante, an Elena, oh well, Elena was right, she was just a jealous hitch! No problem, some writers are dark writers. But to say you just went with the flow? Nah, you created the flow! Be honest now...lol! It was no Romeo and Juliet, it was Ike and Tina on crack...lol! Interesting story though.
DamonSalvatoresbird chapter 25 . 3/5/2018
Wow I read this all in 2 days, that was so so good, it was on the edge of your seat stuff! I honestly didn't expect it to end like that, I thought with Damon seeing their daughter that maybe you would have took us years down the line to show how happy they ended up being, that is what makes the story even more sad because their life could have gone that way but instead Damon was thinking about the daughter that in the end would never be. Fantastic work :)
Guest chapter 25 . 5/5/2017
Loved the ending. It was so different compared to other Bamon fics.
MaNiQ1 chapter 25 . 5/5/2017
Wow, this was tragic and dark and a perfect fitting ending. But my mind is naturally drawn to darkness. Thank you!
Hazel chapter 25 . 1/21/2017
Wow you are funny. And I do love your writing. You did bring it all together in the end. I must say I did not see the death like that coming cuz of the dreams he kept having if their daughter but it make sense in the end. Job well done. And please keep on freestyling... Don't ever try to appease the reader on what they want. You have to go in the direction you see fit...the cw tvd JP producers and writers can take some lessons from you. Cuz in the end you can't please everyone so you may as well please yourself...kudos.
Hazel chapter 22 . 1/21/2017
Don't be sorry well said. And a lot of people feel the same way. Eben now season 8 and they still down playing her role. They got Kat as lead female but give Caroline all the lines and so much more screen time. For 2 episodes they didn't even show Bonnie. Am glad the show is ending cuz am disgusted with their racist mentally. They should have just kept the character white like she is in the books instead of giving the role to a black actress and then downplay her role. They so wrong for this. Kat did look flawless in tonight's episode though.
FalconRukichi chapter 25 . 1/20/2017
... speechless. I need Good bamon scene in my brain now.
LUCIA chapter 22 . 7/6/2016
YOU ARE RIGHT! BONNIE DESERVES HAPPINESS MORE THAN ANYONE OF THEM!
LUCIA chapter 7 . 7/6/2016
Jules and Mason rather are like THE LADY AND THE TRAMP! HAHAHAHAH!
Jeff chapter 25 . 12/31/2015
Omg thats so sad i wanted bonnie to choose mason because what damon did to bonnie was unforgivable i knew it would turn out bad ... great story tho
Guest chapter 25 . 11/15/2015
It was unique... I liked it
Guest chapter 25 . 6/11/2015
Romeo to his juliet...this story was amazing,I know you are an amazing writer,dont give up on your other stories.
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