Noooo! Not degradation again! My Genny ! Nooo Cloud! Vincent somebody help the men!

Pretty interesting story, such a shame it's dead.

Nooo! So close Genesis! Clouds right there! Seriously love this story! Can't wait for Vincent!

I really enjoyed reading this story. IT's well written, the battle scenes are thrilling and the emotions are deep and moving without being overly angsty. I especially like how you portray Genesis. Guilty, but still holding on to some vestiges of arrogance. And also Cloud's struggle with himself about running away or facing himself and the world.

I also think it is interesting how you bring back both of them and that the means that this was done was different.

I'd say I look forward to reading what is next, but I suppose it won't be happening. Thank you anyway for a thoroughly enjoyable read!

Gah! I love it! But Genesis! My fav! And Cloud! My other fav! Such sorrow!

Very interesting story. Seeing the date of the last update, it makes me sad that this probably wont be continued.

Interesting idea to send both of them back to the past.
And poor genesis for getting degration again which was kind of inevitable when he returned to his old body, though.
I hope that aerith will be able to produce this water she made for geostigma to cure genesis and angeal. or cloud can use this strange materia. Is it supposed to be another holy, same like aerith's?

please go on with this story.
cheers
Maya

This is shnifty

Did u quit. :'( I liked this fic, I wanted to see Vincent, and the third person if there is one. I've been dying to k now. I really liked this fic so I applaud you.

Hey, this is great story. Hope you will continue writing. It is quite interresting to read and wander where the story goes. What will happen with Genesis, that is different but still so Genesis. And what about Cloud, wander if the young Cloud is still alive, but just run away? Will they wake Vincent? And what about Jenova?

I do very much hope to see this updated some day, as so far, I love this whole thing. Made me think of The Fifth Act upon reading, honestly.

*whistling and clapping*
cool . i cant wait to see next ch.

Oh, gods, Genesis...Goddess of this story, please keep him safe. I don't care that much for Cloud...But please keep Gen and Seph safe. I love your story and I'm eager to read more. Your writing style is beautiful and expressive. I could give some literary critique, but I tend to do so only after...you know...more chapters.

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Heyo there, just read through your fic., thanks ever so much for writing it! Only problem is that I'm picking up on some major sexual tension between genesis and sephiroth, so for the first time in my life I'm shipping them and ugh it's probably completely unintentional on your part and will never be realized, but dang. Thanks for the new ship