Reviews for Storm Cloud
laelruin chapter 50 . 4/23
Lol! Poor Sasuke needs some serious socializing/friendship/relationship help. T~T
justAstranger chapter 50 . 11/18/2018
Duuude, when are you going to finish this story? I'm dying over here. T.T
E chapter 34 . 10/10/2018
As I am doing a mass read of this fic every time time you get close to oh do we finally get to see them do it. Ole we don’t! YOU SLOW BURN WRITING PERSON ITS DRIVING ME BONKERS! I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 50 . 8/23/2017
Awesome story! Love it!
Scrollmaster chapter 48 . 7/29/2017
Lovely had everything action romance and tragedy well not comedy but it was still an awesome the way u describe kakashis responses to enemies especially in fights was disappointing,most of the time he placed them under genjutsu(with specifically named enemies) while the rest he when Peikou first showed his true intentions
Scrollmaster chapter 44 . 7/28/2017
What the fuck?Seriously I've only read one comment of yours only to find u have eternal hatred for a man who in the end became a come on n yet some people with the same feelings love romeo n world is fucking story but you both bring great honour n disgrace to the character that is kakashi hatake.
Lindt Luirae chapter 5 . 6/4/2017
Ahhh this chapter was so entertaining! I loved the backstory so much!
Lindt Luirae chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
This is so beautiful!
eeearnest chapter 48 . 5/11/2017
I love you. Thank you for writing this. I cant wait for an update! I appreciate your writing style! I love the attention to detail and how youre mixing in a lot of culture. Its quite educational. I love your characterization of Sasuke, at least where you put him anyway. Its so adorable. I cant wait for him and naomi to go somewhere! Youre amazing at setting up a plot and i love how honest your characters are (even if they can be secretive they generally give in easily!). GAH. One small plot hole from the beginning though. When they first kissed I thought it was under a tree, but Sasuke said he saw them in a alley, with her against a wall. Only a small bit but still. Love love love love love. Please write all the things. Thank you for being awesome.
ChuffedInDarkness chapter 48 . 5/7/2017
Wow, this story is incredible! I love it. Please keep up the amazing work and storytelling! I cannot wait for more.
Prescripto13 chapter 48 . 4/30/2017
I agree: On a chilly, rainy day, there's nothing better than coming home to a warm house and a hearty meal!

I also thought the way Kakashi and Gerimaru handled those trespassing Kumo-nin was impressive.
Prescripto13 chapter 47 . 4/14/2017
Nice to see this tale make its return! This chapter was riveting. You're right-Kakashi's mother was certainly in the thick of things!
Guest chapter 46 . 4/3/2017
I hope you continue this story. I love it.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/1/2017
I'm at chapter 17 and I totally love this storyline. Your writing skills are commendable. I hope this ilstory hasn't been abandoned.
elfinn chapter 26 . 2/13/2017
Loved the last paragraph xD
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