| Reviews for Auror Potter Case Files |
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CrazyCrookshanks13 chapter 2 . 7/28 This was my favorite chapter! Good imagination and writing! |
Aphrael9 chapter 4 . 7/13 These are amazing and hilarious! You have a very good imagination for storytelling, thank you! |
lija chapter 4 . 4/24 Ah...the stories are adorable...weird, but adorable and funny. Look forward to seeing more weird cases from Harry. |
Stephanie O chapter 4 . 3/23 That kind of thing would only happen to Harry, starting as a quidditch spectator and ending up catching the snitch! Lol. I got such a kick out of Ginny's snitch-shaped cookies! Hilarious gesture, but I don't blame Harry for only sharing with those who didn't laugh! |
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 3/16 Hilarious! |
sunsethill chapter 4 . 3/15 That was fun! I love how Ron was the one who got a biscuit! This may be one of the better stories I've read that makes Harry/Ginny believable to me. It used to be my OTP, and then Rowling killed it herself with how she wrote their interaction. |
Araytigre chapter 4 . 3/15 Only Harry, LOL. It just may be a curse on him, but how would the dastardly person be? Thank You. TTFN |
Gioia chapter 3 . 3/15 I loved this chapter, too! Actually, I love them all. But I especially got a kick out of Harry, Ginny and McGonagall having such realistic, alarmed reactions to Hagrid's "interesting" creatures and low-key request for help. Kingsley's obliviousness was also excellent as he updated Ginny, and her reaction was hilariously awesome! Great job writing Grawp, too! I've seen that get flubbed, but you were spot on. I'm begging you though, oh gifted writer, never use the words "flash back" again. Show, not tell, remember? ;-) Your story speaks for itself very well. Just do a section break. You had it perfectly written and it was obvious from the context what (and when) we were seeing. (I don't recall seeing you ever do the following, but for anyone else reading my bossy comment, the "Show, not tell" rule of writing also applies to using special formatting, brackets, or asterisks to indicate different languages, inner dialogues, parseltongue, etc. The story's context should always make such distracting training wheels unnecessary to a good writer. Now, I'll just climb off my unnecessary soapbox and bury my decades-ago identity as a newspaper copy editor before anyone else mistakes my friendly attempt at informative teasing for trolling, lol. *slinks away*) |
Gioia chapter 4 . 3/14 I was already laughing throughout this whole chapter... I mean, he JUMPED out of the stands?! And then the snitch flew into his pocket! (Well, he was being pretty daring on the field of play, so maybe that attracts it? Or it thought it could safely hide in a non-player's pocket, lol?) ...But when we saw Ginny's biscuits I laughed till I cried! Thanks for the fun read! I loved it. |
shebasue chapter 1 . 3/14 I just found your stories and love them. But you need to put a warning about drinking while reading these. I laughed so hard coffee sprayed all over my floor! |
digbygreen chapter 3 . 3/13 Harry Potter, Magic Veterinarian. Great story. |
Hands Off MY Wolfie chapter 4 . 3/13 Thank you for the update - I didn't realize it had been that long. But since they are all one-shots, any time is a good time. And Potter catches the Snitch... Thanks for sharing. |
Nanchih chapter 4 . 3/13 These are worth waiting for! I'm glad I have you on Alert! More will be welcome anytime your muse feels giggly! |
HG4EVER69 chapter 4 . 3/13 Great new chapter. |
holyscythe chapter 4 . 3/13 this story is really fun to read i am happy to see more chapter come, what more misadventure will harry have in the future. from an old fan. have a nice time writing and a nice day. :D |