| Reviews for La Petite Mort |
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   Ayyu Hyuuga chapter 8 . 12/6/2019 how can this be a completed story? add some chapter, or epilogue. will they be together, will ciel has a better life. ahhhh please make it clear.. |
| MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 7 . 11/20/2019 damn, I thought u stopped updating this story TwT btw, I'm that WolFox person from AO3 who wrote that long ass comments for TGN:'P |
| purple lolly chapter 7 . 11/16/2019 Thank you for the Double feature for LPM. Moments of calm before the storm I think because as soon as Aidan finds out Ciel lied he's going to be in deep deep poop. I love the additional scene between Aidan and Ciel too I can feel the tension leaping off the page and has me yelling for Ciel to get away. Can't wait for more hopefully soon. |
| purple lolly chapter 5 . 10/3/2019 Love this chapter can't wait for the next |
| MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 5 . 9/28/2019 ugh finally, these 2 can get chillin' together at least for ONCE without trying to strangle each other and, sebastian from wild west? I can't even imagine him wearing a cowboy hat, let alone holding a revolver XD however, of all things, the 1 and only fact about this fic that catch me off guard is that ciel had a TWIN ok so,... if I may ask, what's the TWIN's name? or which "Ciel" is the main character? is he the older 1 or the younger 1?:'P btw, I'm never thought that Undertaker could be that terrifying:'v poor ciel... is he had a Necrophobia? |
| purple lolly chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 I love this fanfiction it has inspired me to pick up my pen and dig out the old pad and pick up where I left off in my own Fanfics. Well the tooth scene but in the rewrite will it be extended and darker. Can't wait for the chapters ahead I'll be sat here waiting. |
| 22rubens chapter 2 . 7/28/2019 Please forgive me if I’m wrong, but did you delete some of the chapters and are now re-posting them? I just received an email that you were posting so I visited this story to find there were only two chapters. Is this just a glitch, or are you re-writing this story? Sorry if I’m being an idiot. |
| Cricketsong.1985 chapter 11 . 7/8/2019 Excellent story, your writing is beautiful! I loved every word, except the word 'miasma' which appeared an unusually high number of times. Your descriptions were rich and easy to visualize, I felt like I was pulled right in to this story. Ciel was perfect, and Sebastian too. I had a sort of anxious, excited feeling in my gut whenever they were together, the way you wrote them was simply lovely. The ending feels rushed, although it was very touching. I get the sense you intended to write more then finished things up without following through. Perhaps some day you will decide to continue thismany readers would be very happy if you did! Overall absolutely phenomenal writing my dear, thank you so much for your hard work on this fic. It was a pleasure to read. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/7/2019 This story is one of the best I have yet to read. Please continue to update! I'm longing for more! |
| Cupid1508 chapter 11 . 6/25/2019 The story was magnificent please don’t give up on this story. |
| kagome092287 chapter 11 . 5/28/2019 I really got sucked in this story. Please keep writing more. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/5/2019 Please continue this story. You are such an amazing writer and you have a wonderful mind. This story is one of my favorites, not just because of the characters or because of the plot, but also because of how well you write. This story is truly beautiful. |
| purple lolly chapter 11 . 4/20/2019 2019 in da house. Just found your story as I like dark Fanfics . Please Please Please tell me that you are still working on this as I know how easily it is to drift away from things. |
| APennyForMyThoughts chapter 11 . 4/16/2019 Wow, your writing is superb, this work is outstanding! Please update here soon, if you can, thank you. |
| Anna McNarin chapter 11 . 3/29/2019 What a unique twist to the characters. Looking forward to more. |
