I enjoyed your story and it is really good! Also keep up the good work!

Damn! This is a super emotionally investing story! I love it! And I loves Screamer and Steve!

:3

Daaaaammmnnnn. Steve you got talent! Just damn Steve. You da best.

I definitely didn't expect this to make me cry but here I am with my face covered in tears! Primus!

Why?! Why?! WHY YOU SO CRUEL! I CRIED MY FREAKIN" OPTICS OUT! mean...mean

Is there ever going to be one of 404 and Bee?

omg can you make a little backstory kinda thing about starscream and how it goes from him leaving to returning in whisper of the spark?

thanks!

As-tu prévu d'écrire une suite à cet ensemble d'histoire un jour ? Non, parce que vraiment je les trouve génial!

THIS FIC IS AN EMOTIONAL ROLLER COASTER
YOU'RE A MAESTRO AND YOUR INSTRUMENT IS MY FEELINGS.

I wonder who Screamer finds along his trip to this endless void, heheh Steve is lucky that his face is absolutely devoid of expression otherwise I wonder how awestruck his face would seem. Oh no no n-n-no Megatron why did he lose emotional(If you can even say Megatron actually "Loved" Starscream) interest in Screamer? And then back on the slavedriving saddle "You are Mine!" Well Meggy he WAS yours when you two WERE infatuated with each other, but yours on intimate terms not overall term(then again just about all Decepticons are Meggzy's slaves). Now this is good all of it is excellent, splendid work kupo.

This took me on a crazy journey, wonderful I couldn't look away.

MWAHAHAHAHA I LEFT THE MAGIC NUMBER REVIEW WHOOP WHOOP PORN WHEE!
GO MY MINIONS! WRITE! READ! PORN! PORN! PORN! WHEE!

*starts laughing hysterically*

oh sweet primus this is awesome

I guess I was right about this taking place in the same universe as 'Easing Tension&whisper of the spark' and I'm half because I really wanted to know what starscream story was.
You wrote this out so well u never left one single detil out in the plot and it just flowed so nicely into the other fics.
I not read any other of your stoies beside these but I hope there more stoies like theses weather there transformers fics or not because your a very talented writer.
Am suprise you not done another TFP fic in the same universe as this but only the other guy 404(Bob?) and bee and how the autobots got the upper hand in the end.
Thanks for the amzaing story-fireworks