| Reviews for The Serpents' Child |
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Legaciesfan27 chapter 33 . 8/11 This story is giving me anxiety like I deadass had an anxiety attack |
Misplaced Samle chapter 47 . 8/7 Are you ever going to continue this? I have read it 5 times now and I keep hoping you will. |
OliveTheNerd chapter 1 . 7/28 Is Blaise no more than a Black male? Who dances? Stereotypes are harmful even if you are joking. And the Mammy elf being based off of a Black woman who was degraded in her “job”? Yeah it’s a no from me |
vancabreuniter chapter 47 . 7/28 This is such an interesting story! I really enjoyed it. I know you haven't updated in ages, but I'm going to follow it just in case. Thanks for writing & sharing it with us. :) |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/4 Stop. Writing. Stories. Where. You. Change. Hermione's. Personality. She'd fight tooth and nail, she'd run, she'd do anything but sit there and attempt to be civil. Character development means you develop them over time, all of them, not completely changing how'd they react right from the start. She would not 'groan' at the word mudblood, she'd punch him in the face and hex him. That would be believable. And when she found out her parents were tortured, she'd immediately lose her mind. How can you still call her clever and strong and amazing if she's not fighting back? |
Guest chapter 21 . 5/21 Thanks for apologies |
Avery940315 chapter 47 . 4/10 Great fanfics! Can you continue it,please? |
bitchgirl chapter 2 . 4/8 Awwww it was so cute! |
cshen.julienne chapter 19 . 3/25 Why are you using a capital letter for Voldemort? He isn't God. |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 45 . 3/21 ...i'm a lost of words, like.. what the–.. why did–.. *sigh* what the hell did i just read?, i just.. dammit, i thought this was–.. i'm looking for some Dark!Hermione fanfics, and that brought me here.. but what i read so far was about some girl who confused and had have her dilemma because about everything that happened to her, that turns out she's lonely, craving for affection, contemplating which is right and which is easy, not to mentioned horny as f*#ck!, now, i like OoC Hermione.. as much as the other guy but this is just not for me man.. not this version, its not for my liking.. my taste lay elsewhere, i love the plot tho, tbh.. Hermione turns out to be Bellatrix daughter and all and have that submissive/masochist side too even sometimes she is reluctant, but this is just not for me... thanks, for making me read until this chapter, but no thanks.. im out, |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 35 . 3/17 for God sake! i thought Draco will find them in that Room of Requirements!? .. dammit!, and then again how is it feels to being used by so-called friends without even realising it? and fyi, that old-manipulatives-man is saying those nice things just because your parents didn't, and he needed you... haaah~ so much for a Gryffindor, lmao now i'm starting to think i regret spending my time reading this fics.. this even not being continued for over years.. 5 years! |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 34 . 3/17 .. is the smut really necessary tho?, for the story progress? about the detail i mean... |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 28 . 3/17 wheew... thank goodness, i thought the reason she's crying is because that Hermione/ronald sh#*et again!, just... please not with that Hermione/ronald sh#*et?! i'm sick of it.. we have seen that enough in the canon, thank you very much.. |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 27 . 3/17 hahee...ayee...oyaa... Draco overprotective-mode switch on, ooof! like this Draco as a smokers too.. adding more point to his other persona, |
Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 26 . 3/17 f*#ck.. |