Another nice Danny whump fic. Thanks for sharing.

Why do fucking bullshit danny focused stories come up in STEVE searches! So sick of this if i wanted danny fucking stories i would search for them but i don't because they are fucking predictable and annoying NO ONE SEEMS TO BE ABLE TO WRITE ABOUT ANYONE BUT DANNY AND ITS BULLSHIT!

interesting twist on Rachael. But I can see her doing something like this at least in the beginning.

wow great story really loved both of your five-o fanfics and cant wait to see more

Rachel is just very self-centered. Great storyline.

Poor Danny and Grace, innocent bystanders.

I can totally see Rachel losing it with Danny if Grace got hurt while with him, but I'm not sure she'd go as far as she did here. Slap him maybe. I dunno, people do strange things in the heat of the moment, especially when scared.

Just my opinion and not meant to cause offence because I still liked this story and the idea behind it.