Vile, how long until chapter 8 of the Kirby right back at ya season 2 fanfic is ready? It's been a while since you updated it

If you screw up the assassin, I will have many, many things to complain to you about.

So this is the scenario that went on. Alright, alright...You know you've been reading too much Universe Falls when you half-expect an angry tirade of having your trust betrayed and being manipulated when much worse things are going to happen. Because let's be honest, they are. Then again, this is not a world where the forces of evil are relentless and will destroy you upon making the slightest hiccup.

But yeah, good to see some girl-time pop up. I'll be honest, that scene with Ryoga honestly feels more like it'd work better if Rio was her canon age, but eh, that be my preference while I realize that there is no fan-art of teenage Rio.

You get a 7/10. 1 point lost for the duel format being somewhat hard to read, another point lost for in the end, not much happening, and a third point lost to motivate you (Which technically makes this an 8/10, but ignore that, why don't you ;))

I’m glad that some of my cards debuted in your FanFiction, so thank you for introducing them.

Wait, has Itsu been to our universe?

You utterly destroyed the 4th wall!

Seems like Flip

This was inspired by Yugi V Arkana wasn't it?

Not that this is bad because of it, in fact it was very good.

I'm surprised there isn't a Pirate Archtype in the game yet... well, unless you count the "Fur Hire" monsters, but with that TCG name they seem more like mercenaries then Pirates to me.

Sorry I haven't review in a while, stuff and other thing happened. But still I loved this story alot, I can't wait to read next story!

Nice to see you're back. And good work, as always, although I think the arguing got a bit intense, detracting from the Duel a tad. But that's just me.

Very intresting chapter I do hope to see more though one question remains

The siren cards wouldn't happen to based on the legendary fishermen would they the hole human rideing sharks and whales thing just maid me think of mako from yugioh season 1

And one last question

Sence you play yokai watch do you plan on incorporating an archetype based on them in your stories? If so I think it could be a good idea

All and I'll I really enjoyed how this chapter played out

This is so cute and understanding at the same time, you did great with Haruto and Dog-chan working together and dueling together, they totally deserve more screen time and more duels often. Did I just realized that you turned Umimi and Tobio into kids? I can understand that no gender is better than the other, I can also see them as childhood sweethearts before they got married! :) Can you do the Tron Family next chapter when they celebrate Tron's birthday and anniversary when his wife's ring went missing? Or Rio dueling a robber at the mall? Good luck with the rest of your Numbershot canon, see you soon Vile-EXE! :)

Could the next one (or the one after) either have Yuma getting fat or him interacting with his Monsters?

So, I had no idea this was even in production, and while I had given Vile the permission to use my fan-made Stellar Engineering cards for Haruto, I had no idea he would go all-out and write a three-way with his customs for Dog-chan, my customs, and RK777's customs! This was admittedly really cool, and honestly, I would've been more than happy to add more cards to the series.

Great chapter ! Can you please make a Shark and Ariel story I kinda Like those kawaii couple even thought Ariel is an OC