Just finished reading this and I loved it. It seems that you’re aware of the criticisms that can be said of this massive story, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. As one who has never seen Sekirei outside of fanfiction I admire how I could follow what’s going on with just the aid of the wiki. This also has one of the best treatments of the ‘harem’ genre with all characters getting their own time and development. I’m definitely going to read your other works next!

Imagine being thousands of years old shinobi with god like powers and still using hand seals xd

Hmm, a damn good story might have skipped a few chapters, but still worth it thru the entire story so keep up the great work!

Hmm, that's weird, I always thought that Minaka was Kabuto in disguise, the whole son thing was unexpected, I don't think it was all that great, but the rest of the story, it's pretty okay, I guess...~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean.

Liked everything except when you made Musubi/Yume 's breasts shrink, plus I think Tsukiyomi had bigger ones than Musubi even in the beginning, but I could be wrong, anyway, if you could just fix that part, that'd be great...

The part about Naruto sleeping with his own daughters was a bit much, dude, it would've been better if Artemis and Athena were actually daughters of Hera from a previous marriage, or maybe they were sisters who didn't have any relation to Naruto at all, but still, pretty good, otherwise..

Easily one of my favorite FanFics :,( the story was great overall

I'm thankful you stopped writing

What utter garbage lol

You constantly stay in your reviews that naruto is a few thousand year old immortal but why is he so weak. At the end of naruto he could punch so hard he split the moon. So why is he evenly fighting a bunch of weak people who he saying in your story to be not even jonin level. You never let him use any of his abilities just make him fight hand to hand and use a sword once. This is a common problem i have with all of your storys. You constantly stay how strong he is then you make him fight on even ground with every person he fights for plot thats it just plot. Your storys have alot of fucking potential then you just use plot to constantly change narutos power level for no reason.

Don't know if you keep reading reviews, but really good story i like it lot.

I get why you as an author would do this but personally I just want to see him kill a few people

God you make naruto immune to her tactics one moment and the next you make him a little bitch. What happened to the training you were gonna make him do?

I tried to get through this since it's so highly acclaimed but I just can't. Maybe it gets better but I shouldnt have to read a 100k into a story to get hooked. Not to mention so many situations and scenes are almost word for word plagiarized from In Flight and your depiction of naruto acting so OOC. I dont mind a character changing over time, and certainly 3000 years is a long time but we as the audience dont see that, it just feels like a character with a well defined personality acting far outside his normal MO. Your chapters feel really bloated as well because you tend to repeat entire paragraphs worth of concepts or info you've already gone over without adding really noteworthy to it.

Only a woman would make a man feel sorry for not accepting an apology and making him apologize