| Reviews for Naturally One |
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AquaEclipse chapter 1 . 8/28/2018 Oops...hahahahahah Brotherly bonding is brilliant. And so is this fic. Cookie for you. (::) |
GenderBender25 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 While i loved this and the language part was hallarious... i seriously think Al would be able to speak many languages fluently due to the fact of all the imigrants and the language/culture they bring with them... |
LilyofAzra chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 I love the interactions between the two. You should write more like it. |
Kasai Shingai chapter 1 . 6/7/2013 Thank you so much for making my day wih this amazing fanfiction :) |
Revriley chapter 1 . 5/19/2013 Ahh, that was fun to read. I've been reading your other fics ever since I finished reading Never Your Hero's most recent update, and it's nice to find another platonic story in your profile (I'm not a USUK person, doesn't mean I still can't enjoy your other stories though). I love Hetalia stories related to actual historical events (I have several in mind at the moment, some centered around the revolution, several about Cyprus, some about Greece and so forth, haven't had the time to write them though), and this was just great. I'm not a fan of the theory that during the civil war a female America was formed, so I was pleased to see the good ol' version of Alfred losing his mind in yours. Love your Canada, by the way, though I think his dialogue is a bit stiff compared to canon. (Then again, this was 1873, he might have still be talking in an overly formal matter back then). Your description of the dessert Alfred was making was very good. I don't like peaches myself, but the dessert as a whole was described so tantalizingly it makes me want to read-I mean, eat it. Whoops. I take French, and Alfred's "John maple Pierre" was hysterical. Now I'm wondering if I reviewed "Never Your Hero." Thought I did, I'll have to check later. It's late where I am. Fun stuff, this was. |
Maxiay chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 I love the part, 'Holy Christ! Imagine if I'd have gone back to my Boss and had to explain murder by bad French in a Canadian kitchen; I'd have caused an international incident! By God, how would I live that one down?' That was pure genius! Thank you for writing this story, i can't wait to check out your other ones. |
Azalea.Rose chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 Briliant characterization and I love all the historical-ness! Really enjoyed reading |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012 The death by bad french nearly made me laugh like a |
Bleach-ed-Na-tsu chapter 1 . 4/27/2012 Oh this is beautiful, I really love !Bros so much and this was a beautiful depiction of what I imagine Alfred would be feeling given such a rough past and what MAtthew would do to help him, you really are talented and thank you for writing this. I really think the cooking was a perfect way to get the brothers to connect, and I personally think the meal(s) you chose were good choices ;) Keep up the awesome work :) |
pennilee chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 Okay, this is really sweet. :) |
false sourires chapter 1 . 3/14/2012 Lovely fanfic! I am so glad I wasn't drinking something when I was reading the part where Alfred was attempting to speak French. SO hilarious. Though I don't quite get the Pierre part... And finally someone recognizes Alfred has some cooking skills beyond making vividly colored cakes! Love the brotherly bonding too. |
moved000 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012 i love all your stories! you have alot of talent, and your writing is most superior this story was beautifully written, i love how you portray the characters, especially canada. and it had bits of very comedy that had me giggling like an idiot. |
TheDawnCatcher chapter 1 . 2/2/2012 I absolutely loved this! You protrayed the both of them so well, with ample amounts of humor and the perfect pinch of tragedy. Yay for Alfred-Speak! |
nobody10901 chapter 1 . 1/24/2012 Wow! This is incredible. It really captures the relationship between the two... Brilliant. Beautiful detail! Alfred's change thoughtout the story was quite noticeable and enjoyable... "Oh my God! My French killed him! DX" XD That is going in my book of quotes. And his French? Oh God... I died laughing. I can't wait to tell my friends who are taking French. I'm taking Spanish. Awesome one-shot! Thanks for writing! |
permantentlyorphanedaccount chapter 1 . 1/24/2012 I wanna start off by saying I really love how you write Matthew, especially in this fic. You make him still quiet and polite, like always, but also passionate and strong and caring. I love the way the brothers iteracted and it was nice how at the begining everything was all serious and angsty and near the end I actually laughed out loud a couple times "Oh my god, my French killed him!" As always, I absolutely adore your descriptions and your style of writting and I think this was awonderful fic! Keep it up, |