Found this chapter so adorable! I immediately listened to Octopus's after reading it. Like Sherlock, I also didn't realized the possible romantic implications on this song :)

“But who doesnt love intoxicating oranges?”
HAHAHAHAHAHAH UR SO GOOD

Good stuff here! I've re-read multiple chapters on my lunch break to make it through til you got to post.

Hope schools working out for you!

Okay, tell me the truth. Since you wrote this on your birthday... you totally imagined that you were John, because you secretly want Sherlock to compose YOU a song :)

I was going to write a very distraught review asking why we had no authors message on this story, but then I finished reading and there was one at the bottom. and i was like "...oh. There it is. Well then...Better at the end, than not at all!" Thank you so much for the kind words. :) I know it was awhile back, but congrats on graduating H.S. I just graduated this past summer myself... so I know how good it feels! and a bit sad. but a good sad. anyway, tally ho!

So, I know it says you are 'currently' living in the U.S. but I somehow get the impression that you have not always lived in the U.S. Mainly by how you describe the American checkout lady. Totally funny, and though I wish it wasn't true, that is how many of us U.S.A. girls are. ahaa... Not me though. Nooooo Mam'! Anyway, I think Sherlock has been loosing his patience and restraint recently. Seems he's been alot more forward with John in the stories lately! Not that it bothers me though!

Well I apparently have a soul. Because I have no clue what it is off hand. And even though I apparently have a soul, it doesn't matter very much anyway, because my soul is the property of quite a long list of actors, writers, fictional characters, and other people or organizations that I fancy.

On the review side of this though, were you having a 'day' or something? because this one seemed much more 'exciting' than the others up to this point. I liked it alot. :)

Hello again! This one was very amusing. it made me giggle alot. I love The Princess Bride link to Sherlock. ahah! Never even thought of it until reading this! Brilliant! Though I am quite disapointed in Sherlock! Popcorn? REALLY?! I mean it worked out well cause they watched a movie... but... still... POPCORN. how is that any more brilliant than chocolate!? ah well, Sherlock can't be the brilliant one ALL the time ;) (yeah he could. but that's not the point) great read. thank you.

Well, I've been reading all your Johnlock fanfics, and this one is my favorite. It's just so "Awe!" Made me tear up and my heart quiver with warmth! so cute. and it sounded like them too. Which is like the main thing I look for when reading fan fics. I'm actually quite picky. When I read fan fics they need to SOUND like how the character really talks and thinks. And I'm really glad you made the ending for this one how you did. because that was the BEST PART! so thanks for the great reads, especially this one!

Oh my God! I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait till next update. I'm seriously asking myself : How can you write so well?
EAGER FOR MORE ;)

love it! the simplicity of their words reflects the complexity of their relationship.

Lovely!

Love love love this.

This is really good! :) Did you realise the first part was repeated in the middle? Sorry if that was intentional and I'm just being blonde haha I don't mean any offense I just wanted to let you know.
I love the way you write their relationship. I can't get over how believable you make it. :D
I know how you feel about irregular updates. I always feel terrible for leaving big gaps between them, but life gets in the way and silly things like family events happen and soon enough it's been two months since the last chapter and you feel like ramming a bayonet through the wall. (okay maybe that last part is just me ;) ) update as soon as you can! (no pressure though obv)

FAN!