Great fic, but Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE check spelling, grammar and also a few of the sentences are a bit oddly worded. If you want advice or want help rewriting sections, just pm Those Sadistic Tendencies.

Good story, but Sherlock is MASSIVELY out of character - I mean, if I was given his lines in this out of context I would assume it was a teenage girl - not Sherlock. And the "sharing I loves you's everyday" - no.

I gotta say; Mycroft needs some better vetting processes for his security details. If they aren't getting killed, they're turning traitor. I can't imagine him having that many screw ups in his area of control.

Sherlock is very, very out of character, you've kind of taken away the cold, superior intellect and snarkiness that we all love about him. Otherwise it's a good story, a promising fic so far, will there be more whumping and trouble to come, or just more fluff? Lol guess we'll find out later lol.

Love the bit about MI5 being scared to enter Sherlock's flat! I would be...
Nice job, love it!
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that was fantastic, i loved its pairing . sequel ?

ok for one you need to get on that sequel two I loved this story and three I have two Sherlock fanfics in the works if you want to check them out both involve hurt john and BAMF Sherlock. they are the damaged doctor and his returned angel and the second on is can he save john from himself once again I loved the story. SEQUEL!
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I usually don't like John and Sherlock slash, but this story was so much more than that :) I really loved every minute of it! The care and concern that's in John and Sherlock's relationship is heart-warming :) Great Job! I hope the sequel is out by now, since I've read this story late!

Awesome story! I loved it!

This is brilliant!

Well... I loooooooved this story! You sure know how to write suspence!

I love Violet Holmes! Fragile yet BAMF.

This is great!
I do have one question though. Wouldnt Mycroft have someone going though their mail? Specifically to intercept letters like that?

Really enjoyed reading this. So what was the inscription on John's wedding ring in the end? As there seemed to be no mention of it.

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!