That, was really beautiful

*sob*

I must have read your story a hundred times and still don't know how to say how much I absolutely adore this.

I absolutely do concur with Skyfullofstars ...

Wow- that was great, I don’t know what you’re talking about! :) Yes, maybe that whole Post- Reichenbach theme can get a little monotonous, but there’s that little part inside of every fangirl that needs it. :-) You have a very professional writing style, and overall it was a nice- although heartbreaking :D- read.

Fantastic job, overall- I really enjoyed it!

I changed my avatar to the eye, and Sky(fullofstars) commented on how you had an eye for your icon...so I checked your user out, and your story made me so sad.

...But it's so good. And sad.

It's making me think of a friend, who, for a historical rom-com, we had to do, wrote it in 2nd person, and it was slash (well it was ambigious - but knowing Poppy - Fizzylly - it would be slash).

Great ending.

Your eye is cooler than mine. I just wanted fire.

beautiful, emotional, intense...

the ending was espeically haunting. brilliant work.

He was yours.

Yours, and yours alone.

You know it. They all know it too, deep down inside.

…

He didn't.

Annnd with this line you broke my heart...

This was absolutely and utterly perfect. Perfectly thought-through, perfectly written, perfectly constructed. It almost made me cry.

heidi

YOU DIDN"T TELL ME HE DIED! HOW COULD YOU FAIL TO TELL ME HE DIED? well, that was a surprise. i knew i missed a lot, but that was rather big. WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?

Whatwhatwhatwhatwhat. Why did I read this first thing in the morning? It's barely seven o'clock, yet I've already had my heart broken today. Oh, John, you aren't selfish, and you aren't possessive. It's okay.

This whole fic was marvelous and beautiful. It's so simple and so very John. You really do write him phenomenally well. I'd write more, but I need to go blow my nose.

This ficcy is completely brilliant. I thought it was great! You did an amazing job writing it and I think it was emotional and really well done!

That last line. THE LAST BLOODY LINE.

Ouch.

I know this is the way that John feels.

He'll be back. Sherlock always comes back, canon has him come back, they are contracted for third season.

But that doesn't mean we can't grieve him for a while.

I think he'd like that. :P

Write more often in second person! This was amazing! You totally captured how I think Watson would felt after the tragic events of Sherlock's fall. Amazing, incredible, brilliant!