loved it but kinda childish and a bit of clishe but i steal like it

I just started this story and I really hope you update soon. It's so exciting and beautiful!

Absolutely in love with this story! Can't wait to read coming chapters :)

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH. MY. GOD.! Thank you I thought you were never gonna update this story, I started reading this a couple of years ago, but you never updated so I gave up hope ...but you finally did! Thank again, when I first read this I got hooked instantly. Keep up the great work!

this is so wonderful! please update soon

Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this story! Please, please update soon!

You better finish up this story. I'll be keeping an eye on you. - walks away backwards pointing using the eye to eye hand gesture-. I'm watching you. And keep up the good work.

love it-
what happens next?

You're back!:D XS fanfiction has been so quiet recently! Your update has really brightened up my day:D have always loved this story and I'm so glad that you've regained ur interest in it! Still supporting this story all the way!:D

OMG, yessss! I'm crying with happiness. I love how you portray raimundo, especially him with his family in this chapter! I CANNOT WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER

¡Qué dulce! ¡me encantó el capítulo! ¡debes de continuar esto, por favor, esta historia es uno de los mejores Raikim que he leído! ¡en serio me alegraste el día cuando leí que habías actualizado! ¡Amo tu fic! Por favor, sigue. ¡Nos leemos, corazones de melones!

I am very glad that you have decided to continue writing. Though a long wait it was very good. This story has been a cery interesting adventure and is one of my favorites for this ship. I look forward to the next chapters. :3

I really want you to update pretty pleeeaaassee

When are you going to up date...WHEN!?

Wow this story just keeps on getting better and better! You did a great job with this story!