Reviews for How To Avoid An Ex
DarkPheonix 666 chapter 1 . 5/8
I love this, France was so awesome making Alfred jealous and realising what an ass he had been to cheat on Arthur. FRUK all the way baby 3
Hetabee chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Oh no! I thought I reviewed this already... Sorry, I should have just done that in the first place. Uh, where to start with this?

Well, one, I LOVED the way you wrote everything in this story - the situation, the revenge, the dialogue, the characters, every little thing about it- you did them justice and they were funny as I don't know what. xD

But then when you got to the actual "stuff" as I'll call it, my God. You just went all in and you worked that document page into wonderfully written smut with small inserts of comedy, you, you're just... Ah! If there were a grading system for fics, you would get an 15/10 is what I'm trying to say. Just don't stop writing, you're too good for that.
AugstinHaddock chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Loved it
Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Hahaha. Well that's ONE way to do it I suppose.
Hopefully Helpful chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I absolutely love this fix, you have no idea, really. But there are a couple spots where you put the name Alfred instead of Arthur such as:

Hey, hey, call me' daddy', just to piss him off!" Francis suggested in a whisper, making Alfred snort quietly and nod.

They kept going, though, and Alfred let out a shaky cry, still trying not to laugh. Then, they heard Alfred step into the stall beside them, and Arthur's eyes widened and he quickly tapped Francis' shoulder.

And that's the only thing that could possibly be wrong in this story. The rest is amazing. And so are you!
wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Great job :D
I really enjoyed the whole England and France being friends in this one :3
IForgotMyAccount chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Don't stop it there, make another one please.
I'm so picky about fan fictions, it was amazing.
Make anotherr [:
Katt42 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This could make a cute multi-chapter about France and Iggy becoming more than just FWB whilst Iggy gets over Alfred. Just a thought. And if not, this was still uber cute in itself
Genuine-Discord chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
OOH! So hot! :D
hetalialover chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
i loved this story that i spent hours searching for it, just to read it a second time! (i also daydreamed about in the afternoon:) i love how slutty arther is. (is it a British trite?) anyway hugs and kisses on the story!
Al D. Baran ou Pervy Otaku chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I just find adorable when Francis calls him "mon amour" in French, or maybe it's mostly because I'm quite French myself and I love that to no end. I also loved how Al took the bet so easily xD... that was indeed epic.
And Francey Pants is such a perv. I bet he'd win an award for that... xD
BurningPages chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
This was fun! I really like the idea of them pretending to have sex and as strange as it is I think I actually liked the fake sex scene more than the actual sex (the actual sex was good too). Mostly cause of the idea of Alfred getting more and more angry at them. xD
Shylittlebunny09 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Oh... This was AWESOME! One of the best FrUK fanfics I have read! I couldn't stop laughing when Arthur offered Francis some of his smoothie during their fake sexual encounter. XD Absolutely love this fic! Very sexy. *.*
funfungirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I love this ! I love this so much, I love it ! /w/ I can't stop reading it ! 3
RedRosesTea chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Omg this was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing!
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