Reviews for First Son
WakerOfWoo chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
I like it. I hope this isn't a one-shot or anything, cause then Sasuke will just be the jerk who left a pregnant girl and went to solve his major-brother problems. If you do write that he comes back, then there will be that 'I loved you and it broke my heart to leave!' kind of vibe from Sasuke. Anyway, I'll be waiting~
hello chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
this story is pretty interesting, keep it up
destiny malfoy chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Hi! I thought that was a great start! WHy don't you write more?
MrsUchiha4L chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
I would really love to see where you go with this new character sayuri, really enjoyed reading so keep it up and I can't wait to read your next story
Jezy chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
I'm waiting for your next update! I love this story!
Momo chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Where's the rest of the story ?:( I thought it was amazing and hilarious :D *thumbs up*
smiles chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
please update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I like this. I really do. I hope you continue.
BehbaLovesTea chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This is an amazing story! I really hope you decide to continue and update soon! Thankyou for an awesomely long story begining, I really love long chapters! :D
Shuuno chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I really love this story! But it seems to be on hiatus will you be continuing or discontinuing it? Please let me know!
painxsmile chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Oohhhh, this is so interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter XD
serp-derp chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Nice Author-san. I really enjoyed reading this one ;) You don't get much of those types of OCs for Sasuke anymore :/
Just one little thing, Sasuke was 13 in pre-shippuden... So did she give birth and such when she was thirteen? ._. Hahaha...
xSamidare chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This is really good! Please Update!XD
arigatoho chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This was lovely to read and your characterizations seem to be spot on so far! I'm very interested to see how the storyline of this will develop. I look forward to more from you!
SinDRegrets911 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I truly enjoyed this and loved your subtle depictions of Sasuke and Naruto's character. Very well done!

-Sin
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