I understand man well its fun and epic ride while is least hell I have couple man with mission amv goes some chapter I wish it makes epic anime about this but it'll not happen will I do love your gunslinger cover continue to good work on that and other stories stay safe out there

Otakucritic

Luffy hits Tsukune, no surprise there I mean he did same thing to Coby(Who had lack of confidence and courage)and to Princess Vivi(who wanted to save her people but Luffy told her she won't save everybody all the time, because people die).

anyway Luffy does get that hitting on the head habit from Grandpa(who does the same thing to him). Frankly Luffy does take after his grandpa Garp and Monkey D Dragon(Luffy's father).

I'm just glad you told us what would have happened

I understand man, no worries. I really liked this one, and so I felt the need to at least tell you how good you made this story. Anyhow, you're a talanted writer, so we still have all the you other projects to look forward to, no?

Keep writing dude, what you feel you like writing.

- Frank

It's sad to see the story go after all these years, but you going out of your way to give us an outline on what was to come and how things would've unfolded was the best thing you can give us. You may have discontinued it, but you provided us some closure in a way.

Thank you for writing SPV! You made reading a joy for middle high school me.

I can taste the irony in this. Not too long ago you said you were going to wrap up A Devil's Diamond so that you could focus on this story, but then you kept writing chapters after your previously intended finishing point, and now you've decided to discontinue this story instead! Don't get me wrong I'm not mad or making fun of you I'm just saying how funny it is how things work out sometimes. A real life is stranger than fiction moment, IMHO.

I completely understand man... they say that motivation for writing a piece has a shelf life of 10 years... and once you lose the motivation to write a specific piece, it's gone forever... I truly enjoyed this story, and I'm alright with this... it was fun while it lasted...

I will say though, I actually had originally brainstormed some thoughts for an alternative to events regarding Saboady and Rosario crew's involvement in the One Piece world I was planning on mentioning, but never got the time or chance to write it all it out to bring it up to you... or for that matter, I lacked the courage to bring it up... I won't mention it here in Review, but I'll probably still PM the synopsis to you later just to look at...

Anyway, I wish you the best, stay healthy, and keep writing whatever is at the forefront of your mind.

Signed,
Mr. Nobody

Fighting this Malia monster seem interesting. Luffy actually coming up with something like using the Moka's rosario and putting it in this vessel giving Outer Moka was smart.

Kurumu kissing Zoro on the lips to bring him back to his senses is quite smart too. Luffy getting a full kiss from Inner Moka was a surprise indeed(I remember during the war when Luffy hugs Hancock in from of some marines was surprise too for the marines that is)and Mizore seeing that and getting stunned and outraged is funny. XD

anyway the rest of the what you wanted to try seems really awesome. I wished you would continue but oh well.

unless you let someone adopt this story(that would be your decision)?

One of the hardest things to do when doing crossovers, imo, is trying to end the crossover while also satisfying both (or multiple) sides of the series used and also satisfying your own expectations for the story (and the readers' to, depending)

in any case, i really understand your struggles. going through them myself, tbh
hoping you'll find what you're looking forward beyond this fic!

Sad to see this end, I hope you keep the story up for reading at least.

I can’t blame you for wanting to end it when you don’t have the passion for it anymore but was surprised you had this planned to go so far into actual One Piece. But with how long One Piece is and still not over I, again, don’t blame you for deciding to end it. Thanks for at least explaining what was going to come next though.

Good luck to your other stories and take care.

It is sad to see this story over but I respect you for giving us your ideas and plans. Thank you for this

I can continue on where you left off

hey man if you don't want the story can I adopt it from you

In all honesty thanks for posting your outline. I'll admit I found out about you because of this story. Hell I read quite a bit of Rosario vampire cross overs back then, but then I stopped reading fics about that Manga. Seeing this put to an end is bitter sweet but I think you should focus on your other brain Childs.

Stay Golden and Safe.

It's a real shame that this fanfiction ended. This was actually one of the first fanfics I have read on this site and it has been an honor and pleasure to be able to read this from start to finish. Take care and keep being awesome! :)