I just re-read this & enjoyed it just as much this time. Thank you again. :)

hey! it is really good, and I wonder why it is not finished, I am going to follow it though, if one day the inspiration strikes again! great job:)

It's criminal how well you write these characters. I don't think I have ever felt these emotions with any other writer. I'm beyond words at expressing how amazing these 3 chapters spoke of angst, love, lust and everything in between. O, How I wish there were more to read!

You should finish this. Your writing is awesome

You really are the most wonderful writer!This is truly fabulous!

I love the tentativeness, the nowelty of their new level of ... "communication". They search and seek but do it... together. I'm only half way through 1st ch but I like this approach for their first time. It seems very real for a couple who has known each other as long as they have.

(I wonder if I've read that story before. Never the less, wouldn't matter. I like it)

This reminds me of Elaboration by Champagne-and-razor-blades. As in, several sentences and phrases seem to be lifted right out of that story.

So good. So very, very good...9

Ch3: Got angsty. But it was beautiful and trueful angst. I suddenly found myself thanking AWM in my head for solving the issues between them before getting them together. In other words - you nailed it, them, their issues and that built in heavenly feeling whenever or whyever they are together.

Ch2: air became just slightly thicker with words, but it was good. Still good.

And I could hear theraphist's voice ringing in my ears, you know.

I don't find it angsty (not the first ch anyway). These are the cleanest, purest words what I've read. Some kind of usual white noise is gone from the background. There is lightness and air between the words and just after absorbing them they form this tight ball in you throat and warm your belly.

Their thoughts and actions are simple and understandable, even when they don't say what they actually mean to say.

Actions so hot with all this simplicity.

This was an amazing piece. I am blown away by how beautifully you write. Thanks for the fabulous read.

Really enjoyed these three chapters. Very well written and you know the characters so well so their voices sound true. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world! Headed off to find more of your work.

I really like this story, this counting-teasing, the so typical Caskett's way to communicate, ...

Wow. Yeah. Wow. That's all I have.

I don't tend to read a lot of M-rated stuff, so I'm slow to join the party - this was only just rec'd to me a few days ago - but I do hope there will be more soon. Absolutely loved this. This is need and want and angst at it's absolute finest.

This:

...tonight he just wants the feel of her shoulder, to nose into the hollow above her collarbone...

Just absolutely broke me.