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How come Koichi didn't seem to have any problem with Ranma turning into a boy in the last chapter?

Great story.

Is there more? I hope so.

i cant beleave it some how you made gennma a good character i give a clap of a hundred hands plus 4

Well, not a bad story, but it lost a little of "pizzah" as it advanced.

Poor Ryouga.

I've read this up to chapter 21, I'm not quite sure why Ranma decided to challenge them in as a male? I can't really think of any reason she couldn't challenge them as a female. Of course the whole situation is a little absurd, considering even if she did loose they still had no rights to Natsuki, and challenging them in such a manner was dishonorable on sooo many levels. It would have been better if she just knocked them both out and got Natsuki back as a human.
Heh, could you imagine if they lost the contest, I'm sorry Natsuki ... we thought we could win but we didn't so now the crazies own you... take care and good luck.

When P. H. Wise says your story is bad and or f-ed up, you need a rewrite. P. H. Wise convinced me that not all fukufics are terrible, (and I HATED fukufic stuff!) but he didn't pull crap out of left field like: "I suddenly agree be a magical girl with no motivation for me deciding to do so!" or such. He explained any OOC and didn't heterofy every relationship! (some people don't care if a character is gay or lesbian!)

Hmm...so much potential ruined for me by turning this into a chick ranma...

Tien has a third eye, Krillin has no nose, they are both fully human; and this story completely derailed... demon... fighting instantly with SSJ2 Vegeta? Seriously? The king of all demons, the most powerful of all demons, is a chump compared to a SSJ2, let alone a SSJ2 Vegeta.

Please do a sequal

What? Thats it?! Thats how you're ending the story?! That one of the most disappointing endings EVER!

Oh I would love it if

Just as they goto enject Ranma again she throws a chi blast in there face take the needle & jam it into one of her capters

Good grief, this is getting confusing! Please make things clear soon, and please, please, PLEASE bring Ryoga back next chapter!